svn commit: r1492384 - /openoffice/site/trunk/content/press.mdtext

[ro...@apache.org]

Author: robweir
Date: Wed Jun 12 19:19:33 2013
New Revision: 1492384

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1492384
Log:
refining language

Modified:
    openoffice/site/trunk/content/press.mdtext

Modified: openoffice/site/trunk/content/press.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/openoffice/site/trunk/content/press.mdtext?rev=1492384&r1=1492383&r2=1492384&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- openoffice/site/trunk/content/press.mdtext (original)
+++ openoffice/site/trunk/content/press.mdtext Wed Jun 12 19:19:33 2013
@@ -29,10 +29,10 @@ Unless otherwise specified, the Apache O
 including committers and Project Management Committee members,
 always express their personal opinions when they post to mailing
 lists or forums, write articles on personal blogs, post comments
-on news websites or blogs, use social networks.
+on news websites or blogs or use social networks.
 
 Personal opinions do not necessarily reflect the views of the
-Apache OpenOffice project, that the press can inquiry about by
+Apache OpenOffice project.  For official responses the press should inquire by
 e-mailing [press@openoffice.apache.org][3].
 
 [1]: mailto:press@openoffice.apache.org