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[GitHub] [flink] Thesharing commented on a change in pull request #13089: [FLINK-18813][docs-zh] Translate the 'Local Installation' page of 'Try Flink' into Chinese
Thesharing commented on a change in pull request #13089:
URL: https://github.com/apache/flink/pull/13089#discussion_r467664155
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File path: docs/try-flink/local_installation.zh.md
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@@ -26,36 +26,35 @@ under the License.
{% if site.version contains "SNAPSHOT" %}
<p style="border-radius: 5px; padding: 5px" class="bg-danger">
<b>
- NOTE: The Apache Flink community only publishes official builds for
- released versions of Apache Flink.
+ 注意：Apache Flink 社区只发布 Apache Flink 发布版本的正式版本。
Review comment:
I wonder would it be better to say "只发布Apache Flink 的官方发行版"?
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File path: docs/try-flink/local_installation.zh.md
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@@ -26,36 +26,35 @@ under the License.
{% if site.version contains "SNAPSHOT" %}
<p style="border-radius: 5px; padding: 5px" class="bg-danger">
<b>
- NOTE: The Apache Flink community only publishes official builds for
- released versions of Apache Flink.
+ 注意：Apache Flink 社区只发布 Apache Flink 发布版本的正式版本。
</b><br>
- Since you are currently looking at the latest SNAPSHOT
- version of the documentation, all version references below will not work.
- Please switch the documentation to the latest released version via the release picker which you
- find on the left side below the menu.
+ 由于你当前正在查看文档的最新快照版本，因此以下所有版本引用都将不起作用。请通过菜单左侧的发布选择器将文档切换到最新发布的版本。
</p>
{% else %}
-Follow these few steps to download the latest stable versions and get started.
+请按照以下几个步骤下载最新的稳定版本并开始使用。
-## Step 1: Download
+<a name="step-1-download"></a>
-To be able to run Flink, the only requirement is to have a working __Java 8 or 11__ installation.
-You can check the correct installation of Java by issuing the following command:
+## 步骤 1：下载
+
+为了能够运行 Flink，唯一的要求就是安装有效的 __Java 8 或者 Java 11__。你可以通过发出以下命令来检查 Java 的正确安装。
{% highlight bash %}
java -version
{% endhighlight %}
-[Download](https://flink.apache.org/downloads.html) the {{ site.version }} release and un-tar it.
+[下载](https://flink.apache.org/downloads.html) {{ site.version }} 发行版本并解压。
{% highlight bash %}
$ tar -xzf flink-{{ site.version }}-bin-scala{{ site.scala_version_suffix }}.tgz
$ cd flink-{{ site.version }}-bin-scala{{ site.scala_version_suffix }}
{% endhighlight %}
-## Step 2: Start a Cluster
+<a name="step-2-start-a-cluster"></a>
+
+## 步骤 2：启动集群
-Flink ships with a single bash script to start a local cluster.
+Flink 附带一个 bash 脚本来启动本地集群。
Review comment:
Would it be better if we translate the whole sentence like “Flink附带了一个bash脚本，可以用于启动本地集群。”?
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File path: docs/try-flink/local_installation.zh.md
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@@ -26,36 +26,35 @@ under the License.
{% if site.version contains "SNAPSHOT" %}
<p style="border-radius: 5px; padding: 5px" class="bg-danger">
<b>
- NOTE: The Apache Flink community only publishes official builds for
- released versions of Apache Flink.
+ 注意：Apache Flink 社区只发布 Apache Flink 发布版本的正式版本。
</b><br>
- Since you are currently looking at the latest SNAPSHOT
- version of the documentation, all version references below will not work.
- Please switch the documentation to the latest released version via the release picker which you
- find on the left side below the menu.
+ 由于你当前正在查看文档的最新快照版本，因此以下所有版本引用都将不起作用。请通过菜单左侧的发布选择器将文档切换到最新发布的版本。
Review comment:
Would it be better to replace “引用” with "链接"? In addition, would it better to translate the latter sentence like "请通过左侧菜单底部的“版本选择”将文档切换到最新发布的版本。"?
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File path: docs/try-flink/local_installation.zh.md
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@@ -64,10 +63,11 @@ Starting standalonesession daemon on host.
Starting taskexecutor daemon on host.
{% endhighlight %}
-## Step 3: Submit a Job
+<a name="step-3-submit-a-job"></a>
-Releases of Flink come with a number of example Jobs.
-You can quickly deploy one of these applications to the running cluster.
+## 步骤 3：提交作业（Job）
+
+Flink 的发行版本附带了许多示例作业。你可以将这些应用程序之一快速部署到正在运行的集群。
Review comment:
Would it be better if we remove "之一"?
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File path: docs/try-flink/local_installation.zh.md
##########
@@ -26,36 +26,35 @@ under the License.
{% if site.version contains "SNAPSHOT" %}
<p style="border-radius: 5px; padding: 5px" class="bg-danger">
<b>
- NOTE: The Apache Flink community only publishes official builds for
- released versions of Apache Flink.
+ 注意：Apache Flink 社区只发布 Apache Flink 发布版本的正式版本。
</b><br>
- Since you are currently looking at the latest SNAPSHOT
- version of the documentation, all version references below will not work.
- Please switch the documentation to the latest released version via the release picker which you
- find on the left side below the menu.
+ 由于你当前正在查看文档的最新快照版本，因此以下所有版本引用都将不起作用。请通过菜单左侧的发布选择器将文档切换到最新发布的版本。
</p>
{% else %}
-Follow these few steps to download the latest stable versions and get started.
+请按照以下几个步骤下载最新的稳定版本并开始使用。
-## Step 1: Download
+<a name="step-1-download"></a>
-To be able to run Flink, the only requirement is to have a working __Java 8 or 11__ installation.
-You can check the correct installation of Java by issuing the following command:
+## 步骤 1：下载
+
+为了能够运行 Flink，唯一的要求就是安装有效的 __Java 8 或者 Java 11__。你可以通过发出以下命令来检查 Java 的正确安装。
Review comment:
I think "发出以下命令" is better to be replaced with "运行以下命令".
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File path: docs/try-flink/local_installation.zh.md
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@@ -80,11 +80,13 @@ $ tail log/flink-*-taskexecutor-*.out
(be,2)
{% endhighlight %}
-Additionally, you can check Flink's [Web UI](http://localhost:8080) to monitor the status of the Cluster and running Job.
+另外，你可以检查 Flink 的 [Web UI](http://localhost:8080) 来监视集群的状态和正在运行的作业。
Review comment:
Would it be better if we change the word "检查" into "通过"?
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