svn commit: r350077 - /httpd/httpd/dist/Announcement2.2.txt

[ni...@apache.org]

Author: niq
Date: Wed Nov 30 15:31:56 2005
New Revision: 350077

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs?rev=350077&view=rev
Log:
Hack wording again, based in part on Noirin Plunkett's comments

Modified:
    httpd/httpd/dist/Announcement2.2.txt

Modified: httpd/httpd/dist/Announcement2.2.txt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs/httpd/httpd/dist/Announcement2.2.txt?rev=350077&r1=350076&r2=350077&view=diff
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--- httpd/httpd/dist/Announcement2.2.txt (original)
+++ httpd/httpd/dist/Announcement2.2.txt Wed Nov 30 15:31:56 2005
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 pleased to announce the release of version 2.2.0 of the Apache HTTP Server
 ("Apache").
 
-We consider this release to be the best version of Apache available and
+We consider this release to be the best version of Apache available, and
 encourage users of all prior versions to upgrade.
 
 Apache HTTP Server 2.2.0 is available for download from:
@@ -20,11 +20,10 @@
 Please see the CHANGES_2.2 file, linked from the download page, for a
 full list of changes.
 
-This release includes the Apache Portable Runtime library suite release
-version 1.2.2, bundled with the tar and zip distributions.  These
-libraries; libapr, libaprutil, and on Win32, libapriconv must all be
-updated to ensure binary compatibility and address many known platform
-bugs.  
+This release includes the Apache Portable Runtime (APR) version 1.2.2
+bundled with the tar and zip distributions.  The APR libraries libapr,
+libaprutil, and (on Win32) libapriconv must all be updated to ensure
+binary compatibility and address many known platform bugs.  
 
 This release has been through extensive testing, including live at some
 of the world's busiest sites, and is now considered stable.  This means
@@ -36,8 +35,8 @@
 
   http://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/httpd/httpd/branches/2.2.x/VERSIONING
 
-When upgrading or installing this version of Apache, please keep in mind
-the following:  If you intend to use Apache with one of the threaded MPMs,
-you must ensure that the modules (and the libraries they depend on) you
-will be using are thread-safe. 
+When upgrading or installing this version of Apache, please bear in mind
+that if you intend to use Apache with one of the threaded MPMs, you must
+ensure that any modules you will be using (and the libraries they depend
+on) are thread-safe.