You are viewing a plain text version of this content. The canonical link for it is here.
Posted to commits@plc4x.apache.org by cd...@apache.org on 2020/01/23 12:56:48 UTC

[plc4x] branch develop updated: - Thanks to Myrle translated things from a sad German English to a real English page

This is an automated email from the ASF dual-hosted git repository.

cdutz pushed a commit to branch develop
in repository https://gitbox.apache.org/repos/asf/plc4x.git


The following commit(s) were added to refs/heads/develop by this push:
     new e9f1cdf  - Thanks to Myrle translated things from a sad German English to a real English page
e9f1cdf is described below

commit e9f1cdfa7b7a02ac802e12c1600c25e1f80ff41b
Author: Christofer Dutz <ch...@c-ware.de>
AuthorDate: Thu Jan 23 13:56:41 2020 +0100

    - Thanks to Myrle translated things from a sad German English to a real English page
---
 src/site/asciidoc/index.adoc | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/site/asciidoc/index.adoc b/src/site/asciidoc/index.adoc
index 8604cc0..0a3e3db 100644
--- a/src/site/asciidoc/index.adoc
+++ b/src/site/asciidoc/index.adoc
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
             <div class="row">
                 <div class="col-lg-8 mx-auto">
                     <h2>Connect your shopfloor assets without having to retrofit them</h2>
-                    <p class="lead">In contrast to other approches, Apache PLC4X lets you connect your industrial assets without needing to modify them.</p>
+                    <p class="lead">In contrast to other approaches, Apache PLC4X lets you connect your industrial assets without the need to modify them.</p>
                 </div>
             </div>
         </div>
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
             <div class="row">
                 <div class="col-lg-8 mx-auto">
                     <h2>Secure by design</h2>
-                    <p class="lead">Not only are Apache PLC4X drivers implemented with security in mind, also do our <b>passive-mode drivers</b> bring to you guaranteed side-effect-freeness without the need to pay for validated software.</p>
+                    <p class="lead">Not only are Apache PLC4X drivers implemented with security in mind, but our passive-mode drivers also bring you a guarantee of freedom from side-effects, without the need to pay for validated software.</p>
                 </div>
             </div>
         </div>
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
             <div class="row">
                 <div class="col-lg-8 mx-auto">
                     <h2>No license-costs, no restrictive licenses</h2>
-                    <p class="lead">Being open-source, Apache PLC4X is <b>free of charge</b>. Start experimenting without worrying about license costs or shady license agreements. The Apache 2.0 is one of the worlds <b>most trusted and adopted</b> open-source licenses out there.</p>
+                    <p class="lead">Being open-source, Apache PLC4X is <b>free of charge</b>. Start experimenting without worrying about license costs or shady license agreements. The Apache 2.0 is one of the world's <b>most trusted and adopted</b> open-source licenses out there.</p>
                 </div>
             </div>
         </div>
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
             <div class="row">
                 <div class="col-lg-8 mx-auto">
                     <h2>Get the commercial support you need</h2>
-                    <p class="lead">Just because you can download and use Apache PLC4X for free doesn't mean that your're left on your own. Some of our community member's comapnies can also provide your with the <b>commercial support</b> you need.</p>
+                    <p class="lead">Just because you can download and use Apache PLC4X for free doesn't mean that you're left on your own. Some of our community members comapnies can also provide your with the <b>commercial support</b> you need.</p>
                 </div>
             </div>
         </div>