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Posted to dev@archiva.apache.org by Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org> on 2012/09/27 18:14:18 UTC

Documentation review

Hi,
I have updated (new pages new screenshots) the documentation see
http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/.
If you could review a bit that will be great :-)

Thanks
-- 
Olivier Lamy
Talend: http://coders.talend.com
http://twitter.com/olamy | http://linkedin.com/in/olamy

Re: Documentation review

Posted by Jean-Baptiste Onofré <jb...@nanthrax.net>.
Thanks for the update, I will take a look tomorrow morning.

Regards
JB

On 09/27/2012 06:14 PM, Olivier Lamy wrote:
> Hi,
> I have updated (new pages new screenshots) the documentation see
> http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/.
> If you could review a bit that will be great :-)
>
> Thanks
>

-- 
Jean-Baptiste Onofré
jbonofre@apache.org
http://blog.nanthrax.net
Talend - http://www.talend.com

RE: Documentation review

Posted by Eric Barboni <sk...@apache.org>.
Good Idea,

but I think it's lot of work 
If UI change a bit, it's easier to change a screenshot compare to recreating
video.

-----Message d'origine-----
De : Jean-Baptiste Onofré [mailto:jb@nanthrax.net] 
Envoyé : vendredi 28 septembre 2012 10:47
À : dev@archiva.apache.org
Objet : Re: Documentation review

Yeah, it could be helpful for the users.

Regards
JB

On 09/28/2012 10:21 AM, Olivier Lamy wrote:
> I was thinking too about some videos hosted on youtube.
> Could that be a good idea ?
>
> 2012/9/28 Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org>:
>> Salut,
>>
>> 2012/9/28 Eric Barboni <Er...@irit.fr>:
>>> My two cents :p
>>>
>>> Screenshots
>>>   screenshot are very readable.
>>>   arrow and text on screen are sometimes in pink sometime in red but
very readable too.
>> Hehe I used skitch pink is default :-)
>>>
>>> Issues:
>>>   
>>> http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/userguide/browsing.ht
>>> ml
>>> typo on clck
>>>
>>> http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/adminguide/roles.html
>>> role-detail.png should be cropped at bottom
>>>
>> I will fix that.
>>
>>> Text:
>>>    Ok for me. (but I'm not new to archiva :p)
>>>
>>> Navigation Issue:
>>>   Download menu item link break the flow of navigation
>>>
>>> Regards
>>> Eric
>>>
>>> Ps:
>>> I correct some link+l&f but I did not deploy (don't want to destroy 
>>> site during review)
>>>
>> Just deployed
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Le Jeudi 27 Septembre 2012 18:14 CEST, Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org> a
écrit:
>>>
>>>> Hi,
>>>> I have updated (new pages new screenshots) the documentation see 
>>>> http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/.
>>>> If you could review a bit that will be great :-)
>>>>
>>>> Thanks
>>>> --
>>>> Olivier Lamy
>>>> Talend: http://coders.talend.com
>>>> http://twitter.com/olamy | http://linkedin.com/in/olamy
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> Olivier Lamy
>> Talend: http://coders.talend.com
>> http://twitter.com/olamy | http://linkedin.com/in/olamy
>
>
>

--
Jean-Baptiste Onofré
jbonofre@apache.org
http://blog.nanthrax.net
Talend - http://www.talend.com


Re: Documentation review

Posted by Jean-Baptiste Onofré <jb...@nanthrax.net>.
Yeah, it could be helpful for the users.

Regards
JB

On 09/28/2012 10:21 AM, Olivier Lamy wrote:
> I was thinking too about some videos hosted on youtube.
> Could that be a good idea ?
>
> 2012/9/28 Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org>:
>> Salut,
>>
>> 2012/9/28 Eric Barboni <Er...@irit.fr>:
>>> My two cents :p
>>>
>>> Screenshots
>>>   screenshot are very readable.
>>>   arrow and text on screen are sometimes in pink sometime in red but very readable too.
>> Hehe I used skitch pink is default :-)
>>>
>>> Issues:
>>>   http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/userguide/browsing.html
>>> typo on clck
>>>
>>> http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/adminguide/roles.html
>>> role-detail.png should be cropped at bottom
>>>
>> I will fix that.
>>
>>> Text:
>>>    Ok for me. (but I'm not new to archiva :p)
>>>
>>> Navigation Issue:
>>>   Download menu item link break the flow of navigation
>>>
>>> Regards
>>> Eric
>>>
>>> Ps:
>>> I correct some link+l&f but I did not deploy (don't want to destroy site during review)
>>>
>> Just deployed
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Le Jeudi 27 Septembre 2012 18:14 CEST, Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org> a écrit:
>>>
>>>> Hi,
>>>> I have updated (new pages new screenshots) the documentation see
>>>> http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/.
>>>> If you could review a bit that will be great :-)
>>>>
>>>> Thanks
>>>> --
>>>> Olivier Lamy
>>>> Talend: http://coders.talend.com
>>>> http://twitter.com/olamy | http://linkedin.com/in/olamy
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> Olivier Lamy
>> Talend: http://coders.talend.com
>> http://twitter.com/olamy | http://linkedin.com/in/olamy
>
>
>

-- 
Jean-Baptiste Onofré
jbonofre@apache.org
http://blog.nanthrax.net
Talend - http://www.talend.com

Re: Documentation review

Posted by Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org>.
I was thinking too about some videos hosted on youtube.
Could that be a good idea ?

2012/9/28 Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org>:
> Salut,
>
> 2012/9/28 Eric Barboni <Er...@irit.fr>:
>> My two cents :p
>>
>> Screenshots
>>  screenshot are very readable.
>>  arrow and text on screen are sometimes in pink sometime in red but very readable too.
> Hehe I used skitch pink is default :-)
>>
>> Issues:
>>  http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/userguide/browsing.html
>> typo on clck
>>
>> http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/adminguide/roles.html
>> role-detail.png should be cropped at bottom
>>
> I will fix that.
>
>> Text:
>>   Ok for me. (but I'm not new to archiva :p)
>>
>> Navigation Issue:
>>  Download menu item link break the flow of navigation
>>
>> Regards
>> Eric
>>
>> Ps:
>> I correct some link+l&f but I did not deploy (don't want to destroy site during review)
>>
> Just deployed
>>
>>
>>
>> Le Jeudi 27 Septembre 2012 18:14 CEST, Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org> a écrit:
>>
>>> Hi,
>>> I have updated (new pages new screenshots) the documentation see
>>> http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/.
>>> If you could review a bit that will be great :-)
>>>
>>> Thanks
>>> --
>>> Olivier Lamy
>>> Talend: http://coders.talend.com
>>> http://twitter.com/olamy | http://linkedin.com/in/olamy
>>
>>
>>
>>
>
>
>
> --
> Olivier Lamy
> Talend: http://coders.talend.com
> http://twitter.com/olamy | http://linkedin.com/in/olamy



-- 
Olivier Lamy
Talend: http://coders.talend.com
http://twitter.com/olamy | http://linkedin.com/in/olamy

Re: Documentation review

Posted by Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org>.
Salut,

2012/9/28 Eric Barboni <Er...@irit.fr>:
> My two cents :p
>
> Screenshots
>  screenshot are very readable.
>  arrow and text on screen are sometimes in pink sometime in red but very readable too.
Hehe I used skitch pink is default :-)
>
> Issues:
>  http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/userguide/browsing.html
> typo on clck
>
> http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/adminguide/roles.html
> role-detail.png should be cropped at bottom
>
I will fix that.

> Text:
>   Ok for me. (but I'm not new to archiva :p)
>
> Navigation Issue:
>  Download menu item link break the flow of navigation
>
> Regards
> Eric
>
> Ps:
> I correct some link+l&f but I did not deploy (don't want to destroy site during review)
>
Just deployed
>
>
>
> Le Jeudi 27 Septembre 2012 18:14 CEST, Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org> a écrit:
>
>> Hi,
>> I have updated (new pages new screenshots) the documentation see
>> http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/.
>> If you could review a bit that will be great :-)
>>
>> Thanks
>> --
>> Olivier Lamy
>> Talend: http://coders.talend.com
>> http://twitter.com/olamy | http://linkedin.com/in/olamy
>
>
>
>



-- 
Olivier Lamy
Talend: http://coders.talend.com
http://twitter.com/olamy | http://linkedin.com/in/olamy

Re: Documentation review

Posted by Eric Barboni <Er...@irit.fr>.
My two cents :p

Screenshots
 screenshot are very readable.
 arrow and text on screen are sometimes in pink sometime in red but very readable too.

Issues:
 http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/userguide/browsing.html
typo on clck 

http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/adminguide/roles.html
role-detail.png should be cropped at bottom 

Text:
  Ok for me. (but I'm not new to archiva :p)

Navigation Issue:
 Download menu item link break the flow of navigation

Regards
Eric

Ps:
I correct some link+l&f but I did not deploy (don't want to destroy site during review)




Le Jeudi 27 Septembre 2012 18:14 CEST, Olivier Lamy <ol...@apache.org> a écrit: 
 
> Hi,
> I have updated (new pages new screenshots) the documentation see
> http://archiva.apache.org/docs/1.4-M3-SNAPSHOT/.
> If you could review a bit that will be great :-)
> 
> Thanks
> -- 
> Olivier Lamy
> Talend: http://coders.talend.com
> http://twitter.com/olamy | http://linkedin.com/in/olamy