[GitHub] [flink] klion26 commented on a change in pull request #13089: [FLINK-18813][docs-zh] Translate the 'Local Installation' page of 'Try Flink' into Chinese

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klion26 commented on a change in pull request #13089:
URL: https://github.com/apache/flink/pull/13089#discussion_r467693267



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File path: docs/try-flink/local_installation.zh.md
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@@ -26,36 +26,35 @@ under the License.
 {% if site.version contains "SNAPSHOT" %}
 <p style="border-radius: 5px; padding: 5px" class="bg-danger">
   <b>
-  NOTE: The Apache Flink community only publishes official builds for
-  released versions of Apache Flink.
+  注意：Apache Flink 社区只发布 Apache Flink 的官方发行版。

Review comment:
       这里的意思应该是说只发布 "release" 的版本，不发布 “snapshot" 的版本

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File path: docs/try-flink/local_installation.zh.md
##########
@@ -26,36 +26,35 @@ under the License.
 {% if site.version contains "SNAPSHOT" %}
 <p style="border-radius: 5px; padding: 5px" class="bg-danger">
   <b>
-  NOTE: The Apache Flink community only publishes official builds for
-  released versions of Apache Flink.
+  注意：Apache Flink 社区只发布 Apache Flink 的官方发行版。
   </b><br>
-  Since you are currently looking at the latest SNAPSHOT
-  version of the documentation, all version references below will not work.
-  Please switch the documentation to the latest released version via the release picker which you
-  find on the left side below the menu.
+  由于你当前正在查看文档的最新快照版本，因此以下所有版本链接都将不起作用。请通过左侧菜单底部的版本选择将文档切换到最新发布的版本。

Review comment:
       这里的意思是 下面的链接只有 release 版本才会展示，但是从这个 md 文件以及渲染的文件看，如果是 snapshot 版本，那么就只会显示这个 ”注意“ 一节，下面的都不会展示。
   我在想，这里的描述是不是可以调整一下呢？

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File path: docs/try-flink/local_installation.zh.md
##########
@@ -26,36 +26,35 @@ under the License.
 {% if site.version contains "SNAPSHOT" %}
 <p style="border-radius: 5px; padding: 5px" class="bg-danger">
   <b>
-  NOTE: The Apache Flink community only publishes official builds for
-  released versions of Apache Flink.
+  注意：Apache Flink 社区只发布 Apache Flink 的官方发行版。
   </b><br>
-  Since you are currently looking at the latest SNAPSHOT
-  version of the documentation, all version references below will not work.
-  Please switch the documentation to the latest released version via the release picker which you
-  find on the left side below the menu.
+  由于你当前正在查看文档的最新快照版本，因此以下所有版本链接都将不起作用。请通过左侧菜单底部的版本选择将文档切换到最新发布的版本。
 </p>
 {% else %}
-Follow these few steps to download the latest stable versions and get started.
+请按照以下几个步骤下载最新的稳定版本并开始使用。
 
-## Step 1: Download
+<a name="step-1-download"></a>
 
-To be able to run Flink, the only requirement is to have a working __Java 8 or 11__ installation.
-You can check the correct installation of Java by issuing the following command:
+## 步骤 1：下载
+
+为了能够运行 Flink，唯一的要求就是安装有效的 __Java 8 或者 Java 11__。你可以通过运行以下命令来检查 Java 的正确安装。
 
 {% highlight bash %}
 java -version
 {% endhighlight %}
 
-[Download](https://flink.apache.org/downloads.html) the {{ site.version }} release and un-tar it. 
+[下载](https://flink.apache.org/downloads.html) {{ site.version }} 发行版本并解压。

Review comment:
       这个地方改成  `发行版 {{site.version}} 并解压`会更好一些吗？ 




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