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[jira] [Created] (PLC4X-145) Confusing text on index page

Sebb created PLC4X-145:
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             Summary: Confusing text on index page
                 Key: PLC4X-145
                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/PLC4X-145
             Project: Apache PLC4X
          Issue Type: Bug
          Components: Website
            Reporter: Sebb


The page http://plc4x.apache.org has the following text:

Beyond implementing the pure adapters we have already implemented some of the planned integration modules to popular projects in the Apache IoT world such as:

... lots of logos ...

Hereby greatly reducing the barriers and the learning curve for creating industrial IoT applications.

This does not make sense -- Hereby should be Thereby -- and the second phrase is separated from the first. Indeed the second phrase is not a complete sentence in itself.

Hereby is for declarations such as: "I hereby declare that ..."
Thereby is for consequences.

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The page also says:

"At first we will be concentrating on providing adapters for the most widely used protocol such as:"

"protocol" should be plural.



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