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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

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Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

Change-Id: Iab3786f113a5492f3aeac7480bfbfdb030cedf5b
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D docs/topics/impala_cdh.xml
M docs/topics/impala_intro.xml
2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 45 deletions(-)


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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

Posted by "Jim Apple (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
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Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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Patch Set 1: Code-Review+2

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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

Posted by "Jim Apple (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
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Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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Patch Set 2:

> Patch Set 1: Verified+1

Next time, can you please use http://jenkins.impala.io:8080/view/Gerrit/job/gerrit-docs-submit/ ? If you do not, sooner or later RAT will break which will shut won everyone else's ability to submit changes.

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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

Posted by "Jim Apple (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
Jim Apple has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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Patch Set 1:

(2 comments)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/5596/1/docs/topics/impala_intro.xml
File docs/topics/impala_intro.xml:

Line 73:     <title>How Impala Works with <keyword keyref="hadoop_distro"/></title>
Should this generally be made even more generic for users who don't use a distro?


Line 82:       <p audience="Cloudera" conref="../shared/impala_common.xml#common/impala_overview_diagram"/>
long line


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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

Posted by "John Russell (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
John Russell has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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Patch Set 1:

(2 comments)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/5596/1/docs/topics/impala_intro.xml
File docs/topics/impala_intro.xml:

Line 73:     <title>How Impala Works with <keyword keyref="hadoop_distro"/></title>
> Should this generally be made even more generic for users who don't use a d
Probably in the end it'll be a different name. I'll defer that to a global search/replace after other cleanup is finished. I have a bunch of other private branches queued up with the original set of keyref= substitution variables.


Line 82:       <p audience="Cloudera" conref="../shared/impala_common.xml#common/impala_overview_diagram"/>
> long line
The convention I adhere to is to not split within the same <tag attribute=...> block. Makes searching simpler for idioms such as "tag containing attribute XYZ". There are some verbose tags in DITA, usually centered around references with paths or URLs, where it's impractical to let them split.


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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

Posted by "John Russell (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
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Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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Patch Set 1:

(1 comment)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/5596/1/docs/topics/impala_cdh.xml
File docs/topics/impala_cdh.xml:

PS1, Line 1: 
> are you talking to yourself? :) Worth checking that everyone is logged in a
Yes, just anticipating likely questions from others.


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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

Posted by "John Russell (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
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Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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(1 comment)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/5596/1/docs/topics/impala_cdh.xml
File docs/topics/impala_cdh.xml:

PS1, Line 1: 
> Hey, why'd you delete that whole file?
All the actual content is pulled into the impala_intro topic, so deleting it was a way to reduce duplicate / stale content and get rid of a file with "cdh" in the filename.


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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

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Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

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Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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> Patch Set 1: Code-Review+2

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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

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Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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(1 comment)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/5596/1/docs/topics/impala_cdh.xml
File docs/topics/impala_cdh.xml:

PS1, Line 1: 
> All the actual content is pulled into the impala_intro topic, so deleting i
are you talking to yourself? :) Worth checking that everyone is logged in as the person they expect to be...


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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

Posted by "John Russell (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
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Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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(1 comment)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/5596/1/docs/topics/impala_cdh.xml
File docs/topics/impala_cdh.xml:

PS1, Line 1: 
Hey, why'd you delete that whole file?


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[Impala-ASF-CR] Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

Posted by "John Russell (Code Review)" <ge...@cloudera.org>.
John Russell has submitted this change and it was merged.

Change subject: Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.
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Take out (stale) architecture diagram w/ Cloudera-specific terminology.

Change-Id: Iab3786f113a5492f3aeac7480bfbfdb030cedf5b
Reviewed-on: http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/5596
Reviewed-by: Jim Apple <jb...@apache.org>
Tested-by: John Russell <jr...@cloudera.com>
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D docs/topics/impala_cdh.xml
M docs/topics/impala_intro.xml
2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 45 deletions(-)

Approvals:
  Jim Apple: Looks good to me, approved
  John Russell: Verified



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