[GitHub] [incubator] dave2wave commented on a change in pull request #81: Update sites.ad

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dave2wave commented on a change in pull request #81:
URL: https://github.com/apache/incubator/pull/81#discussion_r548701296



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File path: pages/guides/sites.ad
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@@ -19,85 +19,80 @@ Apache Incubator PMC
 :imagesdir: ../images/
 
 Podlings need to build a community in Apache in order to be accepted
-as part of the Apache Software Foundation. One of the tools used to build
-a community is the web site.
+as part of the Apache Software Foundation. The podling website is one of the tools you use to build
+that community.
 
 == Podling Website Requirements
 
 Podlings are, by definition, not yet fully accepted as part of the
 Apache Software Foundation. Therefore, they are subject to additional
-constraints on their websites. These policies MUST be adhered to
-before Graduation is considered unless prior approval is obtained from
-the Incubator PMC.
+constraints on their websites. You MUST adhere to these policies before we can consider the podling for
+Graduation, unless you obtain prior approval from the Incubator PMC.
 
 - The published site for each podling must conform to the guidelines in link:/guides/branding.html[Podling Branding/Publicity].
-- Podlings should review link:https://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/linking[Corporate Recognition Best Practices], link:https://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/resources[Apache trademark information], and must aim to be in compliance with link:https://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs[Apache Project Website Branding Policy]
-- The sources for every podling site sources should be maintained in the podling's site SVN or git directory
+- Podlings should review link:https://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/linking[Corporate Recognition Best Practices], link:https://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/resources[Apache trademark information], and must aim to comply with the link:https://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs[Apache Project Website Branding Policy].
+- You should maintain the sources for the podling website in the podling's site SVN or Git directory.

Review comment:
       I think that "Git or SVN repository" is better.




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