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cvs commit: xml-cocoon2/src/documentation/xdocs index.xml
shannon 2002/06/06 10:35:45
Modified: src/documentation/xdocs index.xml
Log:
Minor edits. Could someone
please consider the fixme comment
I added which proposes revised language for
the last sentence of the second paragraph?
Revision Changes Path
1.10 +17 -11 xml-cocoon2/src/documentation/xdocs/index.xml
Index: index.xml
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RCS file: /home/cvs/xml-cocoon2/src/documentation/xdocs/index.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- index.xml 24 May 2002 13:06:18 -0000 1.9
+++ index.xml 6 Jun 2002 17:35:45 -0000 1.10
@@ -11,33 +11,39 @@
</header>
<body>
<figure src="images/cocoon.gif" alt="Cocoon"/>
- <s1 title="What is this?">
+ <s1 title="What is Cocoon?">
<p>
Apache Cocoon is an XML publishing framework that raises the usage of
XML and XSLT technologies for server applications to a new
level. Designed for performance and scalability around pipelined SAX
- processing, Cocoon offers a flexible environment based on the separation
- of concerns between content, logic and style. A centralized
- configuration system and sophisticated caching top this all off and help
- you to create, deploy and maintain rock-solid XML server applications.
+ processing, Cocoon offers a flexible environment based on a separation
+ of concerns between content, logic, and style. To top this all off,
+ Cocoon's centralized configuration system and sophisticated caching help
+ you to create, deploy, and maintain rock-solid XML server applications.
</p>
<p>
- Cocoon interacts with most data sources, including: filesystems, RDBMS,
+ Cocoon interacts with most data sources, including filesystems, RDBMS,
LDAP, native XML databases, and network-based data sources. It adapts
content delivery to the capabilities of different devices like HTML, WML,
- PDF, SVG, RTF just to name a few. Cocoon currently runs as a Servlet or
- from a powerful commandline interface. The chosen design of an abstracted
+ PDF, SVG, and RTF, to name just a few. You can run Cocoon as a Servlet as well as
+ through a powerful, commandline interface. The chosen design of an abstracted
environment gives you the freedom to implement your own concrete
environment to suit your required functionality.
</p>
+ <fixme author="DS">
+ The last sentence remains awkward. Is it correct to write as follows:
+ The deliberate design of its abstract environment gives you the freedom to
+ implement the functionality you need within your own custom, concrete environment.
+ </fixme>
+
</s1>
- <s1 title="Where is it?">
+ <s1 title="Where can I find it?">
<p>
- If you want to download the latest release @released.version@ of Apache Cocoon just go to the
+ To download the latest release @released.version@ of Apache Cocoon, go to the
<link href="http://xml.apache.org/cocoon/dist/">download area.</link>
</p>
<p>
- If you are looking for the past generation of Cocoon (not supported anymore but still available)
+ If you are looking for a past generation of Cocoon (no longer supported but still available),
go to the <link href="http://xml.apache.org/cocoon1/">Cocoon 1.x area</link>.
</p>
</s1>
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