svn commit: r793272 - in /websites/production/esme: ./ content/index.html

[rh...@apache.org]

Author: rhirsch
Date: Mon Jul 25 07:51:45 2011
New Revision: 793272

Log:
Changed welcome page

Modified:
    websites/production/esme/   (props changed)
    websites/production/esme/content/index.html

Propchange: websites/production/esme/
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-/websites/staging/esme/trunk:783347-793171
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Modified: websites/production/esme/content/index.html
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--- websites/production/esme/content/index.html (original)
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   <div id="content">
     <h1 class="title">Welcome to Apache ESME </h1>
-    <p>Welcome to Apache ESME (Enterprise Social Messaging Environment) is a secure and highly scalable microsharing and micromessaging platform that allows people to discover and meet one another and get controlled access to other sources of information.</p>
+    <p>Apache ESME (Enterprise Social Messaging Environment) is a secure and highly scalable microsharing and micromessaging platform that allows people to discover and meet one another and get controlled access to other sources of information.</p>
 <p>You can hardly turn a web page these days without seeing a story that describes how people are using social networks, whether it is Twitter, Facebook or some other service to develop and build their personal communities. </p>
 <p>When solving problems, how useful might it be if a user was able to tap into the collective knowledge of her peers or surrounding groups of people with whom she might naturally network in the workplace setting? How much quicker and with greater precision might she be able to solve daily problems? What if there was a communications mechanism that takes the best of what services like Twitter offers and co-mingled that with readily recognizable business processes? That solution is Apache ESME.</p>
 <h2 id="how_to_download_esme">How to download ESME</h2>