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svn commit: r1748273 - /chemistry/docs/cmis-samples/trunk/docs/samples/create-session.md

Author: jpotts
Date: Mon Jun 13 16:07:07 2016
New Revision: 1748273

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1748273&view=rev
Log:
Fix minor grammar mistakes in create-session.md

Modified:
    chemistry/docs/cmis-samples/trunk/docs/samples/create-session.md

Modified: chemistry/docs/cmis-samples/trunk/docs/samples/create-session.md
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/chemistry/docs/cmis-samples/trunk/docs/samples/create-session.md?rev=1748273&r1=1748272&r2=1748273&view=diff
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--- chemistry/docs/cmis-samples/trunk/docs/samples/create-session.md (original)
+++ chemistry/docs/cmis-samples/trunk/docs/samples/create-session.md Mon Jun 13 16:07:07 2016
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 # Creating a Session
 
-A session is the entry point to the content repository. Creating a session is first thing an application has to do to interact with the repository.
+A session is the entry point to the content repository. Creating a session is the first thing an application has to do to interact with the repository.
 
-A few details such as the URL of the repository endpoint, the user name and the users credentials are necessary to establish a session.
+A few details such as the URL of the repository endpoint, the user name and the user's credentials are necessary to establish a session.
 Beyond that more details might be required, depending on the repository and the environment. Those details are controlled by session parameters.
 
-A complete list of all session parameters for OpenCMIS can be found in the JavaDoc. For PortCMIS, please refer the help file that is contained in the binary packages.
+A complete list of all session parameters for OpenCMIS can be found in the JavaDoc. For PortCMIS, please refer to the help file that is contained in the binary packages.
 
 !!! note "Which binding should I use?"
-    The **Browser Binding** is the fastes binding and is recommended for **CMIS 1.1** repositories.  
+    The **Browser Binding** is the fastest binding and is recommended for **CMIS 1.1** repositories.  
     Choose the **AtomPub Binding** for **CMIS 1.0** repositories.  
-    The Web Services Binding is the last resort and should be avoided. It is the slowest binding and is most complex to set up.
+    The Web Services Binding is the last resort and should be avoided. It is the slowest binding and is the most complex to set up.
 
 
 ## AtomPub Binding
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ ISession session = factory.CreateSession
 ```
 
 
-## Web Services Binding 
+## Web Services Binding
 
 <span class="cmis">CMIS 1.0</span>
 <span class="cmis">CMIS 1.1</span>
@@ -187,4 +187,4 @@ PortCMIS (C#)
 ```csharp
 SessionFactory factory = SessionFactory.NewInstance();
 ISession session = factory.GetRepositories(parameters)[0].CreateSession();
-```
\ No newline at end of file
+```