[GitHub] [pulsar] Anonymitaet commented on a change in pull request #5225: [doc] Improve Pulsar Administration Pulsar Statistics

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Anonymitaet commented on a change in pull request #5225: [doc] Improve Pulsar Administration Pulsar Statistics
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5225#discussion_r326100668
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/administration-stats.md
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 @@ -23,41 +23,41 @@ sidebar_label: Pulsar statistics
 |my-subscription| The name of this subscription (client defined)|
 |msgBacklog|  The count of messages in backlog for this subscription|
 |type|  This subscription type|
-|msgRateExpired|  The rate at which messages were discarded instead of dispatched from this subscription due to TTL|
+|msgRateExpired|  The rate at which messages are discarded instead of dispatched from this subscription due to TTL|
 |consumers| The list of connected consumers for this subscription|
 |consumerName|  Internal identifier for this consumer, generated by the client library|
-|availablePermits|  The number of messages this consumer has space for in the client library’s listen queue. A value of 0 means the client library’s queue is full and receive() isn’t being called. A nonzero value means this consumer is ready to be dispatched messages.|
+|availablePermits|  The number of messages this consumer has space for in the listen queue of client library. A value of 0 means the queue of client library is full and receive() is not being called. A nonzero value means this consumer is ready to be dispatched messages.|
 |replication| This section gives the stats for cross-colo replication of this topic|
 |replicationBacklog|  The outbound replication backlog in messages|
 |connected| Whether the outbound replicator is connected|
 |replicationDelayInSeconds| How long the oldest message has been waiting to be sent through the connection, if connected is true|
-|inboundConnection| The IP and port of the broker in the remote cluster’s publisher connection to this broker|
-|inboundConnectedSince| The TCP connection being used to publish messages to the remote cluster. If there are no local publishers connected, this connection is automatically closed after a minute.|
+|inboundConnection| The IP and port of the broker in the publisher connection of remote cluster to this broker |
+|inboundConnectedSince| The TCP connection being used to publish messages to the remote cluster. If no local publishers are connected, this connection is automatically closed after a minute.|
 
 
 ## Topics
 
 |Stat|Description|
 |---|---|
-|entriesAddedCounter| Messages published since this broker loaded this topic|
+|entriesAddedCounter| Messages publishes since this broker loads this topic|
 
 Review comment:
   ```suggestion
   |entriesAddedCounter| Messages published since this broker loads this topic|
   ```
   
   messages are published, use passive voice

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