Author: okram
Date: Thu Mar 19 17:28:19 2015
New Revision: 1667822
URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1667822
Log:
tweaks to language
Modified:
incubator/tinkerpop/site/index.html
Modified: incubator/tinkerpop/site/index.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/tinkerpop/site/index.html?rev=1667822&r1=1667821&r2=1667822&view=diff
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--- incubator/tinkerpop/site/index.html (original)
+++ incubator/tinkerpop/site/index.html Thu Mar 19 17:28:19 2015
@@ -84,14 +84,14 @@
<li>Join the <a href="http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/incubator-tinkerpop-dev/">TinkerPop Developer</a> public mailing list.
<ul><li>Contribute ideas on how to make the TinkerPop code- and documentation-base better.</li></ul>
<li>Submit bug and feature issues to TinkerPop JIRA.</li>
- <ul><li>Provide easily reproducible bugs reports and well articulated feature requests.</li></ul>
+ <ul><li>Provide easily reproducible bug reports and well articulated feature requests.</li></ul>
<li>Clone the TinkerPop <a href="https://github.com/apache/incubator-tinkerpop">Git repository</a> and provide a <a href="https://help.github.com/articles/using-pull-requests/">pull-request</a>.
<ul><li>Focus on a particular area of the codebase and take responsibility for your contribution.</li></ul>
<li>Make significant, long lasting contributions over time.</li>
- <ul><li>Become a TinkerPop Commmitter and help shape the long term vision of The TinkerPop.</li></ul>
+ <ul><li>Become a TinkerPop Commmitter and help determine the evolutionary path of The TinkerPop.</li></ul>
</ol>
<h3>Apache TinkerPop Committers</h3>
- TinkerPop craves to absorb committers dedicated to the art of graph computing. TinkerPop committers bring solid theoretical/development/testing/documentation skills, are committed to TinkerPop beyond the daily demands of their job, and maintain responsibility for their contributions over time.
+ TinkerPop relishes committers dedicated to the art of graph computing. TinkerPop committers bring solid theoretical, development, testing, documentation, etc. skills to the group. Committers contribute to TinkerPop beyond the everchanging requirements of their day-to-day jobs and maintain responsibility for their contributions through time.
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<ul>
<li><a href="http://markorodriguez.com">Marko A. Rodriguez</a> (2009): Gremlin language, Gremlin OLAP, vendor process test suite, documentation.</li>