svn commit: r1348540 - /creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/index.apt

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Author: rdonkin
Date: Sun Jun 10 07:24:44 2012
New Revision: 1348540

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1348540&view=rev
Log:
Improve phrasing for project plug.

Modified:
    creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/index.apt

Modified: creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/index.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/index.apt?rev=1348540&r1=1348539&r2=1348540&view=diff
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--- creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/index.apt (original)
+++ creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/index.apt Sun Jun 10 07:24:44 2012
@@ -22,13 +22,13 @@
 What Is Apache Whisker?
 
   Apache Whisker assists assembled applications maintain correct legal 
-documentation. Whisker is part of the Apache Creadur suite of tools for
-auditing and comprehending software distributions.
-
-  Apache Whisker is developed by the {{{http://creadur.apache.org}Apache Creadur project}}, 
-a language- and build-agnostic home for software distribution comprehension 
-and audit tools.
+  documentation. 
 
+  Apache Whisker is part of the {{{http://creadur.apache.org}Apache Creadur}}
+  language- and build-agnostic suite of tools for auditing and comprehending 
+  software distributions. Our community develops 
+  {{{http://www.opensource.org/} open source software}} the
+  {{{http://www.apache.org/foundation/how-it-works.html} Apache way}}.  
 
 * What's An Assembled Application?