[GitHub] [pulsar] Anonymitaet commented on a change in pull request #7454: [doc] fix doc after remove bc-shaded

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Anonymitaet commented on a change in pull request #7454:
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/7454#discussion_r449941739



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File path: site2/docs/security-bouncy-castle.md
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@@ -37,8 +37,7 @@ Pulsar module `bouncy-castle-bc`, which defined by `bouncy-castle/bc/pom.xml` co
     </dependency>
 ```
 
-And based on Pulsar module `bouncy-castle-bc`, Pulsar shades a fat jar in module `bouncy-castle-bc-shaded` that contains needed classes of BouncyCastle non-FIPS jars.
-By using this `bouncy-castle-bc-shaded` module, user can easily include and exclude BouncyCastle non-FIPS jars.
+By using this `bouncy-castle-bc` module, user can easily include and exclude BouncyCastle non-FIPS jars.

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   By using this `bouncy-castle-bc` module, you can easily include and exclude BouncyCastle non-FIPS jars.
   ```
   
   Use the second-person pronoun `you` as much as possible in technical writing.
   
   Please check all occurrences. 




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