svn commit: r1834250 - /comdev/site/trunk/content/newcommitter.mdtext

[se...@apache.org]

Author: sebb
Date: Sun Jun 24 13:40:16 2018
New Revision: 1834250

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1834250&view=rev
Log:
Clarify when sec creates a/c

Modified:
    comdev/site/trunk/content/newcommitter.mdtext

Modified: comdev/site/trunk/content/newcommitter.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/comdev/site/trunk/content/newcommitter.mdtext?rev=1834250&r1=1834249&r2=1834250&view=diff
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--- comdev/site/trunk/content/newcommitter.mdtext (original)
+++ comdev/site/trunk/content/newcommitter.mdtext Sun Jun 24 13:40:16 2018
@@ -306,14 +306,17 @@ This is the followup email after the new
 Follow the instructions
     [here](http://www.apache.org/dev/pmc.html#newcommitter).
 
-In summary, the account creation request is made by the 
-secretary or assistant who files the ICLA, if the ICLA identifies
-the project and a proper Apache id, and if the
-[RESULT][VOTE] message has been posted to the pmc private list.
-Otherwise, the new account request will be made by the
-PMC Chair (or any ASF Member if the chair is unavailable)
+In summary:
 
-PMC chair needs to use the [ASF New Account Request][2] form to
+If the ICLA identifies the project and a valid Apache id, and the
+[RESULT][VOTE] message has been posted to the PMC private list, then
+the account creation request is made by the 
+secretary or assistant who files the ICLA.
+
+Otherwise, the new account request should be made by the
+PMC Chair (or any ASF Member if the chair is unavailable).
+
+The PMC chair needs to use the [ASF New Account Request][2] form to
 send a new account request. Members may use [ASF New Account 
 Request][3] page for ASF members to use.