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Posted to commits@cordova.apache.org by mw...@apache.org on 2013/11/04 20:53:24 UTC
[16/17] docs commit: [CB-3962] clarify 'user'
[CB-3962] clarify 'user'
Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/commit/082b8a15
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/tree/082b8a15
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/diff/082b8a15
Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: 082b8a154e7ecf27e792b2028aaf0386d93e630f
Parents: d26c8df
Author: Mike Sierra <ms...@adobe.com>
Authored: Mon Nov 4 13:16:19 2013 -0500
Committer: Michael Brooks <mi...@michaelbrooks.ca>
Committed: Mon Nov 4 11:52:51 2013 -0800
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STYLESHEET.md | 8 ++++----
docs/en/edge/cordova/contacts/Contact/contact.md | 4 ++--
2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/082b8a15/STYLESHEET.md
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diff --git a/STYLESHEET.md b/STYLESHEET.md
index cdb723a..78545b6 100644
--- a/STYLESHEET.md
+++ b/STYLESHEET.md
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ license: Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
Developers contributing to Cordova are already familiar with coding
best practices. What you'll find here are best practices when writing
-tech doc addressed to Cordova's end users.
+tech doc addressed to Cordova developers.
There are two basic kinds of tech doc: reference content and
expository "guide" content. Reference doc tends to be self-contained,
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ immensely.
necessary connective tissue. Link to other related & prerequisite
topics, especially for likely workflow scenarios. E.g., Plugman doc
is most appropriate for platform-specific shell-tool workflow, not
- for CLI users even though it underlies it invisibly.
+ for the CLI even though it underlies it invisibly.
* __Consistent Headings__: Try to match verb tense in headings. That
is, if one is task-based and reads "Adding a Platform," the other
@@ -201,8 +201,8 @@ immensely.
## Usage
-* "User" may refer to the end user, not to the application's
- developer. Refer to plural "users" as "they" to avoid singular
+* "User" may refer to the end user, not to an application's
+ "developer." Refer to plural "users" as "they" to avoid singular
he/she pronoun problems. Also avoid "his" and "her".
<!--RE\bs?he\b--> <!--RE\b(his|her)\b-->
http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/082b8a15/docs/en/edge/cordova/contacts/Contact/contact.md
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diff --git a/docs/en/edge/cordova/contacts/Contact/contact.md b/docs/en/edge/cordova/contacts/Contact/contact.md
index 8567f85..daf7bfc 100644
--- a/docs/en/edge/cordova/contacts/Contact/contact.md
+++ b/docs/en/edge/cordova/contacts/Contact/contact.md
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Contains properties that describe a contact, such as a user's personal or busine
- __id__: A globally unique identifier. _(DOMString)_
-- __displayName__: The name of this Contact, suitable for display to end-users. _(DOMString)_
+- __displayName__: The name of this Contact, suitable for display to end users. _(DOMString)_
- __name__: An object containing all components of a persons name. _(ContactName)_
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ for details.
- __displayName__: When creating a contact, the value provided for the display name parameter differs from the display name retrieved when finding the contact.
-- __urls__: When creating a contact, users can input and save more than one web address, but only one is available is available when searching the contact.
+- __urls__: When creating a contact, users can input and save more than one web address, but only one is available when searching the contact.
- __phoneNumbers__: The _pref_ option is not supported. The _type_ is not supported in a _find_ operation. Only one `phoneNumber` is allowed for each _type_.