[GitHub] [activemq-artemis] gtully commented on a change in pull request #3788: ARTEMIS-3365 - add simple local-target balancer example with amqp fai…

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gtully commented on a change in pull request #3788:
URL: https://github.com/apache/activemq-artemis/pull/3788#discussion_r723964104



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File path: docs/user-manual/en/broker-balancers.md
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@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ It is a string retrieved from an incoming client connection, the supported value
 * `USER_NAME` is the username indicated by the client.
 
 ## Pools
-The pool is a group of target brokers and checks periodically their state.
+The pool is a group of target brokers with periodic checks on their state.
 It provides a list of ready target brokers to distribute incoming client connections only when it is active.
-A pool becomes active when the minimum number of ready target brokers defined by the `quorum-size` parameter is reached.
+A pool becomes active when the minimum number of target brokers, as defined by the `quorum-size` parameter, is reached.

Review comment:
       thanks




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