svn commit: r400115 - in /jakarta/commons/proper/scxml/trunk/xdocs/guide: custom-semantics.xml datamodel.xml

[ra...@apache.org]

Author: rahul
Date: Fri May  5 10:32:10 2006
New Revision: 400115

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs?rev=400115&view=rev
Log:
A quick proof-reading pass.

Modified:
    jakarta/commons/proper/scxml/trunk/xdocs/guide/custom-semantics.xml
    jakarta/commons/proper/scxml/trunk/xdocs/guide/datamodel.xml

Modified: jakarta/commons/proper/scxml/trunk/xdocs/guide/custom-semantics.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs/jakarta/commons/proper/scxml/trunk/xdocs/guide/custom-semantics.xml?rev=400115&r1=400114&r2=400115&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- jakarta/commons/proper/scxml/trunk/xdocs/guide/custom-semantics.xml (original)
+++ jakarta/commons/proper/scxml/trunk/xdocs/guide/custom-semantics.xml Fri May  5 10:32:10 2006
@@ -55,7 +55,8 @@
     <p>Consider dispute resolution for example -- when more than one
     outbound transitions from a single state hold true. The default
     <code>SCXMLSemantics</code> implementation available in the distribution
-    is puristic, it will throw a <code>ModelException</code>. However, a user
+    does none, it will follow all filtered transitions, possibly leading to a
+    <code>ModelException</code> immediately or down the road. However, a user
     may want:</p>
 
     <ul>

Modified: jakarta/commons/proper/scxml/trunk/xdocs/guide/datamodel.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs/jakarta/commons/proper/scxml/trunk/xdocs/guide/datamodel.xml?rev=400115&r1=400114&r2=400115&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- jakarta/commons/proper/scxml/trunk/xdocs/guide/datamodel.xml (original)
+++ jakarta/commons/proper/scxml/trunk/xdocs/guide/datamodel.xml Fri May  5 10:32:10 2006
@@ -59,8 +59,8 @@
         &lt;data name="hotelbooking"&gt;
           &lt;hotel&gt;
             &lt;stay&gt;
-              &lt;arrival/&gt;
-              &lt;checkout/&gt;
+              &lt;startdate/&gt;
+              &lt;enddate/&gt;
             &lt;/stay&gt;
             &lt;adults&gt;1&lt;/adults&gt;
             &lt;children&gt;0&lt;/children&gt;
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@
     <a href="../apidocs/org/apache/commons/scxml/Context.html">Context</a>
     for each state that needs one, and each data element may be thought of
     as a <code>org.w3c.dom.Node</code> object placed in the corresponding
-    Context. See datamodel element at the document root populates the
+    Context. The datamodel element at the document root populates the
     root context. See <a href="contexts-evaluators.html">contexts and evaluators</a>
     section of this user guide for more on contexts, evaluators and root
     contexts.</p>
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@
     common) the car rental reservation dates coincide with the hotel booking
     dates, such a data "copy" is performed as:
     <pre>
-      &lt;assign location="Data(carrental, 'car/stay')"
+      &lt;assign location="Data(carrental, 'car/dates')"
                  expr="Data(hotelbooking, 'hotel/stay')" /&gt;
 
       &lt;!-- copies over all children of &lt;stay&gt;, the



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