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[jira] Created: (FELIX-2827) Spelling Mistake
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Key: FELIX-2827
URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FELIX-2827
Project: Felix
Issue Type: Bug
Components: Documentation
Reporter: Andriyko
In the Providing OSGI services:
http://felix.apache.org/site/providing-osgi-services.html#ProvidingOSGiservices-Instancereconfiguration
The mistakes are:
1. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", first sentence in parenthesis, first word should be "from" not "form".
2. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", in the bullet points under "Other strategies are available:", first point: "strategy="instance" allows creating one service object per asking iPOJO instance (despite they are in the same bundle)" - I find the use of word "asking" weird here, and the wording inside the parenthesis is confusing - what is in the same bundle as what?
3. In the section titled "Several Service Providing (XML only)", "Several Service Providing" is not a proper sentence or a combination of words, I think.
4. Under "Several Service Providing (XML only)", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: "All this provided service will be manage" - should be "managed". Also it is not clear what is meant by - "by the same handler but separately", how can the same handler manage them "separately", as opposed to "together"?
5. Under "Service Property Propagation", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence, ends in "to all published service.", should be "services".
6. Section titled "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services" perhaps should be titled "Publishing an Abstract or Concrete class as a Service"?. Same change must be carried into the 1st sentence.
7. Under "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services", last sentence of the section "However, such practice are not recommended.", should be "is not.".
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[jira] Resolved: (FELIX-2827) Spelling Mistake
Posted by "Clement Escoffier (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
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Clement Escoffier resolved FELIX-2827.
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Resolution: Fixed
Assignee: Clement Escoffier
> Spelling Mistake
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>
> Key: FELIX-2827
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FELIX-2827
> Project: Felix
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: Documentation
> Reporter: Andriyko
> Assignee: Clement Escoffier
> Labels: grammar, spelling
>
> In the Providing OSGI services:
> http://felix.apache.org/site/providing-osgi-services.html#ProvidingOSGiservices-Instancereconfiguration
> The mistakes are:
> 1. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", first sentence in parenthesis, first word should be "from" not "form".
> 2. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", in the bullet points under "Other strategies are available:", first point: "strategy="instance" allows creating one service object per asking iPOJO instance (despite they are in the same bundle)" - I find the use of word "asking" weird here, and the wording inside the parenthesis is confusing - what is in the same bundle as what?
> 3. In the section titled "Several Service Providing (XML only)", "Several Service Providing" is not a proper sentence or a combination of words, I think.
> 4. Under "Several Service Providing (XML only)", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: "All this provided service will be manage" - should be "managed". Also it is not clear what is meant by - "by the same handler but separately", how can the same handler manage them "separately", as opposed to "together"?
> 5. Under "Service Property Propagation", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence, ends in "to all published service.", should be "services".
> 6. Section titled "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services" perhaps should be titled "Publishing an Abstract or Concrete class as a Service"?. Same change must be carried into the 1st sentence.
> 7. Under "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services", last sentence of the section "However, such practice are not recommended.", should be "is not.".
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[jira] Commented: (FELIX-2827) Spelling Mistake
Posted by "Clement Escoffier (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>.
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Clement Escoffier commented on FELIX-2827:
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Hi,
I've updated the page. Will be sync shortly.
Thanks !
> Spelling Mistake
> ----------------
>
> Key: FELIX-2827
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FELIX-2827
> Project: Felix
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: Documentation
> Reporter: Andriyko
> Assignee: Clement Escoffier
> Labels: grammar, spelling
>
> In the Providing OSGI services:
> http://felix.apache.org/site/providing-osgi-services.html#ProvidingOSGiservices-Instancereconfiguration
> The mistakes are:
> 1. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", first sentence in parenthesis, first word should be "from" not "form".
> 2. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", in the bullet points under "Other strategies are available:", first point: "strategy="instance" allows creating one service object per asking iPOJO instance (despite they are in the same bundle)" - I find the use of word "asking" weird here, and the wording inside the parenthesis is confusing - what is in the same bundle as what?
> 3. In the section titled "Several Service Providing (XML only)", "Several Service Providing" is not a proper sentence or a combination of words, I think.
> 4. Under "Several Service Providing (XML only)", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: "All this provided service will be manage" - should be "managed". Also it is not clear what is meant by - "by the same handler but separately", how can the same handler manage them "separately", as opposed to "together"?
> 5. Under "Service Property Propagation", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence, ends in "to all published service.", should be "services".
> 6. Section titled "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services" perhaps should be titled "Publishing an Abstract or Concrete class as a Service"?. Same change must be carried into the 1st sentence.
> 7. Under "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services", last sentence of the section "However, such practice are not recommended.", should be "is not.".
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