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Review Request 36658: Updated SSL documentation. Added to home page.

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Review request for mesos, Benjamin Hindman and Michael Park.


Bugs: MESOS-3121
    https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-3121


Repository: mesos


Description
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Updated SSL documentation. Added to home page.


Diffs
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  docs/home.md a02fea62360b39ed6af2025db52c06014f0a4ef2 
  docs/mesos-ssl.md bb218492df90c922bc4955daeca5513ba9d18633 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/diff/


Testing
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Thanks,

Joris Van Remoortere


Re: Review Request 36658: Updated SSL documentation. Added to home page.

Posted by Mesos ReviewBot <re...@mesos.apache.org>.
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Patch looks great!

Reviews applied: [36656, 36658]

All tests passed.

- Mesos ReviewBot


On July 21, 2015, 9:39 p.m., Joris Van Remoortere wrote:
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> (Updated July 21, 2015, 9:39 p.m.)
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> 
> Review request for mesos, Benjamin Hindman and Michael Park.
> 
> 
> Bugs: MESOS-3121
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-3121
> 
> 
> Repository: mesos
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Updated SSL documentation. Added to home page.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/home.md a02fea62360b39ed6af2025db52c06014f0a4ef2 
>   docs/mesos-ssl.md bb218492df90c922bc4955daeca5513ba9d18633 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/diff/
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> 
> Testing
> -------
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> Thanks,
> 
> Joris Van Remoortere
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Re: Review Request 36658: Updated SSL documentation. Added to home page.

Posted by Artem Harutyunyan <ar...@mesosphere.io>.
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Ship it!


Rendered affected files, everything looks good.

- Artem Harutyunyan


On July 21, 2015, 2:39 p.m., Joris Van Remoortere wrote:
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> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/
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> 
> (Updated July 21, 2015, 2:39 p.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for mesos, Benjamin Hindman and Michael Park.
> 
> 
> Bugs: MESOS-3121
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-3121
> 
> 
> Repository: mesos
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Updated SSL documentation. Added to home page.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/home.md a02fea62360b39ed6af2025db52c06014f0a4ef2 
>   docs/mesos-ssl.md bb218492df90c922bc4955daeca5513ba9d18633 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Joris Van Remoortere
> 
>


Re: Review Request 36658: Updated SSL documentation. Added to home page.

Posted by Benjamin Hindman <be...@berkeley.edu>.
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Ship it!



docs/home.md (line 27)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/#comment146754>

    s/ssl/SSL/
    
    ;-)



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 51)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/#comment146753>

    I thought you said it was also "broken" on some distribution ... does "broken" here just mean insecure or actually doesn't work? Please clarify and/or update this comment and then let's commit. Thanks!


- Benjamin Hindman


On July 21, 2015, 10:51 p.m., Joris Van Remoortere wrote:
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> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated July 21, 2015, 10:51 p.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for mesos, Benjamin Hindman and Michael Park.
> 
> 
> Bugs: MESOS-3121
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-3121
> 
> 
> Repository: mesos
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> See summary.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/home.md a02fea62360b39ed6af2025db52c06014f0a4ef2 
>   docs/mesos-ssl.md bb218492df90c922bc4955daeca5513ba9d18633 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Joris Van Remoortere
> 
>


Re: Review Request 36658: Updated SSL documentation. Added to home page.

Posted by Mesos ReviewBot <re...@mesos.apache.org>.
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Patch looks great!

Reviews applied: [36646, 36656, 36658]

All tests passed.

- Mesos ReviewBot


On July 26, 2015, 6:01 p.m., Joris Van Remoortere wrote:
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> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/
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> 
> (Updated July 26, 2015, 6:01 p.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for mesos, Benjamin Hindman and Michael Park.
> 
> 
> Bugs: MESOS-3121
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-3121
> 
> 
> Repository: mesos
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> See summary.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/home.md a02fea62360b39ed6af2025db52c06014f0a4ef2 
>   docs/mesos-ssl.md bb218492df90c922bc4955daeca5513ba9d18633 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Joris Van Remoortere
> 
>


Re: Review Request 36658: Updated SSL documentation. Added to home page.

Posted by Joris Van Remoortere <jo...@gmail.com>.
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(Updated July 26, 2015, 6:01 p.m.)


Review request for mesos, Benjamin Hindman and Michael Park.


Changes
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clean up.


Bugs: MESOS-3121
    https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-3121


Repository: mesos


Description
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See summary.


Diffs (updated)
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  docs/home.md a02fea62360b39ed6af2025db52c06014f0a4ef2 
  docs/mesos-ssl.md bb218492df90c922bc4955daeca5513ba9d18633 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/diff/


Testing
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Thanks,

Joris Van Remoortere


Re: Review Request 36658: Updated SSL documentation. Added to home page.

Posted by Michael Park <mc...@gmail.com>.
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Sorry, most of the issues I raised in this review are unrelated to the changes in this patch.


docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 5)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/#comment146864>

    We should have a space after `#` for headings (e.g. `# Configuration`). Here and below.



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 8)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/#comment146865>

    We don't seem to wrap "Mesos 0.23.0" in backquotes in the rest of our docs.



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 21)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/#comment146867>

    `s/http/HTTP/`



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 24)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/#comment146868>

    `s/this binary/Mesos`? `SSL_CERT_FILE` is an environment variable, so it's not necessarily specific to a binary, right?



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 35)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/#comment146866>

    Should this be something like `SSL_VERIFY_DEPTH=(N)`? `4` isn't the only possible value right?



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 51)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/#comment146862>

    1. `s/SSLV2/SSL V2/` since we wrote `TLS V1.2` rather than `TLSV1.2` or something like that?
    4. `s/if you understand the risks fully/if you fully understand the risks/`



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 74)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/#comment146869>

    `s/_Please note:_/__NOTE:__/`?



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 85)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/#comment146870>

    1. `s/_Please note:_/__NOTE:__/`?
    2. `s/talk/speak/` or whatever term we're using to describe SSL communication.



docs/mesos-ssl.md (line 88)
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/#comment146871>

    `s/SSL_SUPPORT_DOWNGRADE/`SSL_SUPPORT_DOWNGRADE`/`


- Michael Park


On July 21, 2015, 10:51 p.m., Joris Van Remoortere wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated July 21, 2015, 10:51 p.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for mesos, Benjamin Hindman and Michael Park.
> 
> 
> Bugs: MESOS-3121
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-3121
> 
> 
> Repository: mesos
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> See summary.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/home.md a02fea62360b39ed6af2025db52c06014f0a4ef2 
>   docs/mesos-ssl.md bb218492df90c922bc4955daeca5513ba9d18633 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Joris Van Remoortere
> 
>


Re: Review Request 36658: Updated SSL documentation. Added to home page.

Posted by Joris Van Remoortere <jo...@gmail.com>.
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This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/
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(Updated July 21, 2015, 10:51 p.m.)


Review request for mesos, Benjamin Hindman and Michael Park.


Bugs: MESOS-3121
    https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-3121


Repository: mesos


Description (updated)
-------

See summary.


Diffs
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  docs/home.md a02fea62360b39ed6af2025db52c06014f0a4ef2 
  docs/mesos-ssl.md bb218492df90c922bc4955daeca5513ba9d18633 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/36658/diff/


Testing
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Thanks,

Joris Van Remoortere