[GitHub] [cloudstack-documentation] sureshanaparti commented on a change in pull request #226: Quick install guide update

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sureshanaparti commented on a change in pull request #226:
URL: https://github.com/apache/cloudstack-documentation/pull/226#discussion_r710879184



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File path: source/quickinstallationguide/qig.rst
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@@ -611,121 +607,194 @@ to using the CloudStack UI for the actual configuration of our cloud.
 Configuration
 -------------
 
-As we noted before we will be using security groups to provide isolation and 
-by default that implies that we'll be using a flat layer-2 network. It also 
-means that the simplicity of our setup means that we can use the quick 
-installer.
-
-
 UI Access
 ~~~~~~~~~
 
 To get access to CloudStack's web interface, merely point your browser to 
-http://172.16.10.2:8080/client The default username is 'admin', and the 
-default password is 'password'. You should see a splash screen that allows you 
-to choose several options for setting up CloudStack. You should choose the 
-Continue with Basic Setup option.
+the IP address of your machine e.g. http://172.16.10.2:8080/client
+The default username is 'admin', and the default password is 'password'.
 
-You should now see a prompt requiring you to change the password for the admin 
-user. Please do so.
+Setting up a Zone
+-----------------
 
+Zone Type
+~~~~~~~~~
 
-Setting up a Zone
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+A zone is the largest organization entity in CloudStack - and we'll be
+creating one.
+
+.. warning::
+      We will be configuring an Advanced Zone in a way that will allow us to access both
+      the "Management" network of the cloud as well as the "Public" network - we will do so
+      by using the same CIDR (but different part of it, i.e. different IP ranges) for both 
+      "Management" (Pod) and "Public" networks - which is something your would NEVER do 
+      in a production - this is done strictly for testing purposes only in this guide!
+
+Click "Continue with Installation" to continue - you will be offered to change your 
+root admin password - please do so, and click on OK.
+
+A new Zone wizard will pop-up. Please chose Advanced (don't tick the "Security Groups") and click on Next.
+
+Zone Details
+~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-A zone is the largest organization entity in CloudStack - and we'll be 
-creating one, this should be the screen that you see in front of you now. And 
-for us there are 5 pieces of information that we need.
+On this page we enter where our dns servers are located.

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   On this page, we enter where our DNS servers are located.
   ```




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