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[jira] Updated: (DERBY-382) Doc Review (CLOSED TO FURTHER COMMENTS): Derby Reference Manual
[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-382?page=all ]
Jeff Levitt updated DERBY-382:
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Attachment: derby382.diff
The attached patch makes the changes requested in this doc review. I have created sample output on my own site:
HTML files: http://derby.mylevita.com/tools/
PDF: http://derby.mylevita.com/tools/derbytools.pdf
The patch affects EVERY dita file, but not the content for each file. This is because I modified the year in the dita source file copyrights for each file from "2004" to "2005". So while every file is listed in the patch, the only changes that will appear in the PDF and HTML files are those requested in this doc review.
I was not able to incorporate several requests due to the need for either more input or more time. I have created a new JIRA issue for fix in 10.2 outlining these requirements. It is http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-423
Also, note that I have made the change to the trademarks page in the same way that I did to the Getting Started guide patch in http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-379.
> Doc Review (CLOSED TO FURTHER COMMENTS): Derby Reference Manual
> ---------------------------------------------------------------
>
> Key: DERBY-382
> URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-382
> Project: Derby
> Type: Improvement
> Components: Documentation
> Environment: all
> Reporter: Jeff Levitt
> Priority: Minor
> Fix For: 10.1.1.0
> Attachments: derby382.diff
>
> This issue tracks comments for the Derby Reference Manual. The deadline for posting comments was Tuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.
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