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Posted to cvs@cocoon.apache.org by rg...@apache.org on 2005/10/29 14:47:40 UTC

svn commit: r329405 - /cocoon/whiteboard/daisy-to-docs/src/documentation/resources/stylesheets/daisy/preFilter.xsl

Author: rgardler
Date: Sat Oct 29 05:47:33 2005
New Revision: 329405

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs?rev=329405&view=rev
Log:
improve the invitation to the development version of the document

Modified:
    cocoon/whiteboard/daisy-to-docs/src/documentation/resources/stylesheets/daisy/preFilter.xsl

Modified: cocoon/whiteboard/daisy-to-docs/src/documentation/resources/stylesheets/daisy/preFilter.xsl
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewcvs/cocoon/whiteboard/daisy-to-docs/src/documentation/resources/stylesheets/daisy/preFilter.xsl?rev=329405&r1=329404&r2=329405&view=diff
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--- cocoon/whiteboard/daisy-to-docs/src/documentation/resources/stylesheets/daisy/preFilter.xsl (original)
+++ cocoon/whiteboard/daisy-to-docs/src/documentation/resources/stylesheets/daisy/preFilter.xsl Sat Oct 29 05:47:33 2005
@@ -35,12 +35,14 @@
         <html>
           <body>
             <div class="daisy-edit-link">
-            
-              <p>Please help us keep these documents accurate and up to date.
+              
+              <p><em>Errors and Improvements?</em>
+                 If you see any errors or potential improvements in this document
+                 please help us keep these documents accurate and up to date.
                 <a>
                   <xsl:attribute name="href"><xsl:value-of select="concat($daisy-wiki-URL, '/', $daisy-collection, '/', $daisy-documentId)"/></xsl:attribute>
-                  View and Edit
-                </a>the latest development version of this document
+                  View, Edit or comment on
+                </a> the latest development version (registration required).
               </p>
               <!-- Direct edit link does not work as it does not go to a login screen
                 <form method="POST">