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[jira] [Commented] (GEODE-655) Geode web page sentence should be
better worded
[ https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/GEODE-655?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=15053075#comment-15053075 ]
ASF GitHub Bot commented on GEODE-655:
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GitHub user karensmolermiller opened a pull request:
https://github.com/apache/incubator-geode/pull/55
GEODE-655 Website sentence needs improvement
The first sentence on the http://geode.incubator.apache.org/ web page means something different than intended. The sentence says
"Solving low latency data management problems at very high concurrency since 2002."
Low latency modifies data management problems. Because of this, the sentence implies that the problems being solved are ones that exhibit low latency. This is the opposite of what is intended.
This pull request implements a better wording for that sentence:
Providing low latency, high concurrency data management solutions since 2002.
You can merge this pull request into a Git repository by running:
$ git pull https://github.com/karensmolermiller/incubator-geode feature/GEODE-655
Alternatively you can review and apply these changes as the patch at:
https://github.com/apache/incubator-geode/pull/55.patch
To close this pull request, make a commit to your master/trunk branch
with (at least) the following in the commit message:
This closes #55
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commit f86ddd4dc32a78a84d186cbc01fa3dccce060340
Author: Karen Miller <km...@pivotal.io>
Date: 2015-12-11T17:30:35Z
GEODE-655 Website sentence needs improvement
The first sentence intends the opposite of what it says. Thus, it
should be changed.
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> Geode web page sentence should be better worded
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>
> Key: GEODE-655
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/GEODE-655
> Project: Geode
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: web-content
> Reporter: Karen Smoler Miller
>
> The first sentence on the http://geode.incubator.apache.org/ web page means something different than intended. The sentence says
> _"Solving low latency data management problems at very high concurrency since 2002."_
> Low latency modifies data management problems. Because of this, the sentence implies that the problems being solved are ones that exhibit low latency. This is the opposite of what is intended.
> Here is a better wording for that sentence:
> _Providing low latency, high concurrency data management solutions since 2002._
> Pull request to make this change will follow.
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