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Posted to reviews@aurora.apache.org by Stephan Erb <st...@dev.static-void.de> on 2016/01/02 01:28:35 UTC

Review Request 41844: Update and slightly extend the beginner tutorial

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Review request for Aurora and Bill Farner.


Repository: aurora


Description
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Goal is to bring the tutorial up to date. Included changes:

* Update screenshots to match the new Aurora UI where necessary
* Fix job vs service mismatch by adapting the descirption to account for throttling
* Some slight adaptations here and there but mostly no new content was added
* Some minior missing corrections from https://reviews.apache.org/r/41732/


Diffs
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  README.md 52d850cb90272d4311f7560a94d0bb50dac5b1a6 
  docs/README.md 1312d704575a6c4b611d7acf16eda98b1814c78f 
  docs/developing-aurora-scheduler.md 40e123d6fb9e84288679e2a85e0ab741f7117600 
  docs/images/CompletedTasks.png PRE-CREATION 
  docs/images/HelloWorldJob.png 7a8957594348ac227c8860d57c8d7b8365a67749 
  docs/images/RoleJobs.png d41ee0bc1e6dfbc42d50e4a675dda0a47e1f1cd2 
  docs/images/RunningJob.png PRE-CREATION 
  docs/images/ScheduledJobs.png 21bfcae2f636d2032c30c63f91df08d6fa1b65ad 
  docs/images/TaskBreakdown.png 125a4e9e07fe66c680a4c39388938ac5ed593c5e 
  docs/images/aurora_logo.png abcfbb840ba610f752bbcd2db47fb46c984822f3 
  docs/images/killedtask.png b173698ef83e52ea19b818e6d06da9211f5cc637 
  docs/images/runningtask.png 7f7553cc9d06204b8ea12b01b275def586d0499f 
  docs/images/stderr.png b83ccfa36850c080a00faf139e13b0252ec4f21c 
  docs/images/stdout.png fb4e0b7b7550e98011ea5ced5738fdc01c2ff731 
  docs/tools.md c14aa2e5a00f72dff11d68e2600923925af6809c 
  docs/tutorial.md 1bdc1ca3f3cc87efd27a517c6d54d58a03ceee71 
  examples/vagrant/test_tutorial.sh 4628241d7baa507fc17414d7cdb40e76e6d609a5 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/diff/


Testing
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Rendered version is available at https://github.com/StephanErb/aurora/blob/docu-update/docs/tutorial.md


Thanks,

Stephan Erb


Re: Review Request 41844: Update and slightly extend the beginner tutorial

Posted by Bill Farner <wf...@apache.org>.
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This is great, thanks for the cleanup!  Can you rebase your branch on GitHub?  I'm failing to cleanly apply the patch:

```
$ curl -sSL https://github.com/apache/aurora/compare/master...StephanErb:docu-update.patch | git am -3
Applying: Add Aurora logo
Using index info to reconstruct a base tree...
Falling back to patching base and 3-way merge...
No changes -- Patch already applied.
Applying: Add logo to README/github frontpage
Using index info to reconstruct a base tree...
M	README.md
<stdin>:15: trailing whitespace.
It supports running long-running services, cron jobs, and ad-hoc jobs.
warning: 1 line adds whitespace errors.
Falling back to patching base and 3-way merge...
Auto-merging README.md
CONFLICT (content): Merge conflict in README.md
Failed to merge in the changes.
Patch failed at 0002 Add logo to README/github frontpage
```

- Bill Farner


On Jan. 1, 2016, 4:28 p.m., Stephan Erb wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated Jan. 1, 2016, 4:28 p.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for Aurora and Bill Farner.
> 
> 
> Repository: aurora
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Goal is to bring the tutorial up to date. Included changes:
> 
> * Update screenshots to match the new Aurora UI where necessary
> * Fix job vs service mismatch by adapting the descirption to account for throttling
> * Some slight adaptations here and there but mostly no new content was added
> * Some minior missing corrections from https://reviews.apache.org/r/41732/
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   README.md 52d850cb90272d4311f7560a94d0bb50dac5b1a6 
>   docs/README.md 1312d704575a6c4b611d7acf16eda98b1814c78f 
>   docs/developing-aurora-scheduler.md 40e123d6fb9e84288679e2a85e0ab741f7117600 
>   docs/images/CompletedTasks.png PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/images/HelloWorldJob.png 7a8957594348ac227c8860d57c8d7b8365a67749 
>   docs/images/RoleJobs.png d41ee0bc1e6dfbc42d50e4a675dda0a47e1f1cd2 
>   docs/images/RunningJob.png PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/images/ScheduledJobs.png 21bfcae2f636d2032c30c63f91df08d6fa1b65ad 
>   docs/images/TaskBreakdown.png 125a4e9e07fe66c680a4c39388938ac5ed593c5e 
>   docs/images/aurora_logo.png abcfbb840ba610f752bbcd2db47fb46c984822f3 
>   docs/images/killedtask.png b173698ef83e52ea19b818e6d06da9211f5cc637 
>   docs/images/runningtask.png 7f7553cc9d06204b8ea12b01b275def586d0499f 
>   docs/images/stderr.png b83ccfa36850c080a00faf139e13b0252ec4f21c 
>   docs/images/stdout.png fb4e0b7b7550e98011ea5ced5738fdc01c2ff731 
>   docs/tools.md c14aa2e5a00f72dff11d68e2600923925af6809c 
>   docs/tutorial.md 1bdc1ca3f3cc87efd27a517c6d54d58a03ceee71 
>   examples/vagrant/test_tutorial.sh 4628241d7baa507fc17414d7cdb40e76e6d609a5 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Rendered version is available at https://github.com/StephanErb/aurora/blob/docu-update/docs/tutorial.md
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Stephan Erb
> 
>


Re: Review Request 41844: Update and slightly extend the beginner tutorial

Posted by Bill Farner <wf...@apache.org>.
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Ship it!


Sorry for the delay, committing this now!

- Bill Farner


On Jan. 3, 2016, 12:42 p.m., Stephan Erb wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated Jan. 3, 2016, 12:42 p.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for Aurora and Bill Farner.
> 
> 
> Repository: aurora
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Goal is to bring the tutorial up to date. Included changes:
> 
> * Update screenshots to match the new Aurora UI where necessary
> * Fix job vs service mismatch by adapting the descirption to account for throttling
> * Some slight adaptations here and there but mostly no new content was added
> * Some minior missing corrections from https://reviews.apache.org/r/41732/
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   README.md 52d850cb90272d4311f7560a94d0bb50dac5b1a6 
>   docs/README.md 55dc4db1dd1222989f92e11d05f0b2a7f7591bd6 
>   docs/developing-aurora-scheduler.md 40e123d6fb9e84288679e2a85e0ab741f7117600 
>   docs/images/CompletedTasks.png PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/images/HelloWorldJob.png 7a8957594348ac227c8860d57c8d7b8365a67749 
>   docs/images/RoleJobs.png d41ee0bc1e6dfbc42d50e4a675dda0a47e1f1cd2 
>   docs/images/RunningJob.png PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/images/ScheduledJobs.png 21bfcae2f636d2032c30c63f91df08d6fa1b65ad 
>   docs/images/TaskBreakdown.png 125a4e9e07fe66c680a4c39388938ac5ed593c5e 
>   docs/images/killedtask.png b173698ef83e52ea19b818e6d06da9211f5cc637 
>   docs/images/runningtask.png 7f7553cc9d06204b8ea12b01b275def586d0499f 
>   docs/images/stderr.png b83ccfa36850c080a00faf139e13b0252ec4f21c 
>   docs/images/stdout.png fb4e0b7b7550e98011ea5ced5738fdc01c2ff731 
>   docs/tools.md c14aa2e5a00f72dff11d68e2600923925af6809c 
>   docs/tutorial.md 1bdc1ca3f3cc87efd27a517c6d54d58a03ceee71 
>   examples/vagrant/test_tutorial.sh 4628241d7baa507fc17414d7cdb40e76e6d609a5 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Rendered version is available at https://github.com/StephanErb/aurora/blob/tutorial/docs/tutorial.md
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Stephan Erb
> 
>


Re: Review Request 41844: Update and slightly extend the beginner tutorial

Posted by Aurora ReviewBot <wf...@apache.org>.
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This patch does not apply cleanly against master (5b46fd1), do you need to rebase?

I will refresh this build result if you post a review containing "@ReviewBot retry"

- Aurora ReviewBot


On Jan. 3, 2016, 8:42 p.m., Stephan Erb wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated Jan. 3, 2016, 8:42 p.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for Aurora and Bill Farner.
> 
> 
> Repository: aurora
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Goal is to bring the tutorial up to date. Included changes:
> 
> * Update screenshots to match the new Aurora UI where necessary
> * Fix job vs service mismatch by adapting the descirption to account for throttling
> * Some slight adaptations here and there but mostly no new content was added
> * Some minior missing corrections from https://reviews.apache.org/r/41732/
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   README.md 52d850cb90272d4311f7560a94d0bb50dac5b1a6 
>   docs/README.md 55dc4db1dd1222989f92e11d05f0b2a7f7591bd6 
>   docs/developing-aurora-scheduler.md 40e123d6fb9e84288679e2a85e0ab741f7117600 
>   docs/images/CompletedTasks.png PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/images/HelloWorldJob.png 7a8957594348ac227c8860d57c8d7b8365a67749 
>   docs/images/RoleJobs.png d41ee0bc1e6dfbc42d50e4a675dda0a47e1f1cd2 
>   docs/images/RunningJob.png PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/images/ScheduledJobs.png 21bfcae2f636d2032c30c63f91df08d6fa1b65ad 
>   docs/images/TaskBreakdown.png 125a4e9e07fe66c680a4c39388938ac5ed593c5e 
>   docs/images/killedtask.png b173698ef83e52ea19b818e6d06da9211f5cc637 
>   docs/images/runningtask.png 7f7553cc9d06204b8ea12b01b275def586d0499f 
>   docs/images/stderr.png b83ccfa36850c080a00faf139e13b0252ec4f21c 
>   docs/images/stdout.png fb4e0b7b7550e98011ea5ced5738fdc01c2ff731 
>   docs/tools.md c14aa2e5a00f72dff11d68e2600923925af6809c 
>   docs/tutorial.md 1bdc1ca3f3cc87efd27a517c6d54d58a03ceee71 
>   examples/vagrant/test_tutorial.sh 4628241d7baa507fc17414d7cdb40e76e6d609a5 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Rendered version is available at https://github.com/StephanErb/aurora/blob/tutorial/docs/tutorial.md
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Stephan Erb
> 
>


Re: Review Request 41844: Update and slightly extend the beginner tutorial

Posted by Stephan Erb <st...@dev.static-void.de>.
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https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/
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(Updated Jan. 3, 2016, 9:42 p.m.)


Review request for Aurora and Bill Farner.


Changes
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Updated the patch and pushed to a new branch. This should now do the trick: `curl -sSL https://github.com/apache/aurora/compare/master...StephanErb:tutorial.patch | git am -3`


Repository: aurora


Description
-------

Goal is to bring the tutorial up to date. Included changes:

* Update screenshots to match the new Aurora UI where necessary
* Fix job vs service mismatch by adapting the descirption to account for throttling
* Some slight adaptations here and there but mostly no new content was added
* Some minior missing corrections from https://reviews.apache.org/r/41732/


Diffs (updated)
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  README.md 52d850cb90272d4311f7560a94d0bb50dac5b1a6 
  docs/README.md 55dc4db1dd1222989f92e11d05f0b2a7f7591bd6 
  docs/developing-aurora-scheduler.md 40e123d6fb9e84288679e2a85e0ab741f7117600 
  docs/images/CompletedTasks.png PRE-CREATION 
  docs/images/HelloWorldJob.png 7a8957594348ac227c8860d57c8d7b8365a67749 
  docs/images/RoleJobs.png d41ee0bc1e6dfbc42d50e4a675dda0a47e1f1cd2 
  docs/images/RunningJob.png PRE-CREATION 
  docs/images/ScheduledJobs.png 21bfcae2f636d2032c30c63f91df08d6fa1b65ad 
  docs/images/TaskBreakdown.png 125a4e9e07fe66c680a4c39388938ac5ed593c5e 
  docs/images/killedtask.png b173698ef83e52ea19b818e6d06da9211f5cc637 
  docs/images/runningtask.png 7f7553cc9d06204b8ea12b01b275def586d0499f 
  docs/images/stderr.png b83ccfa36850c080a00faf139e13b0252ec4f21c 
  docs/images/stdout.png fb4e0b7b7550e98011ea5ced5738fdc01c2ff731 
  docs/tools.md c14aa2e5a00f72dff11d68e2600923925af6809c 
  docs/tutorial.md 1bdc1ca3f3cc87efd27a517c6d54d58a03ceee71 
  examples/vagrant/test_tutorial.sh 4628241d7baa507fc17414d7cdb40e76e6d609a5 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/diff/


Testing (updated)
-------

Rendered version is available at https://github.com/StephanErb/aurora/blob/tutorial/docs/tutorial.md


Thanks,

Stephan Erb


Re: Review Request 41844: Update and slightly extend the beginner tutorial

Posted by Aurora ReviewBot <wf...@apache.org>.
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https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/#review112423
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This patch does not apply cleanly against master (4a9f2ff), do you need to rebase?

I will refresh this build result if you post a review containing "@ReviewBot retry"

- Aurora ReviewBot


On Jan. 2, 2016, 12:28 a.m., Stephan Erb wrote:
> 
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit:
> https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/
> -----------------------------------------------------------
> 
> (Updated Jan. 2, 2016, 12:28 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for Aurora and Bill Farner.
> 
> 
> Repository: aurora
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Goal is to bring the tutorial up to date. Included changes:
> 
> * Update screenshots to match the new Aurora UI where necessary
> * Fix job vs service mismatch by adapting the descirption to account for throttling
> * Some slight adaptations here and there but mostly no new content was added
> * Some minior missing corrections from https://reviews.apache.org/r/41732/
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   README.md 52d850cb90272d4311f7560a94d0bb50dac5b1a6 
>   docs/README.md 1312d704575a6c4b611d7acf16eda98b1814c78f 
>   docs/developing-aurora-scheduler.md 40e123d6fb9e84288679e2a85e0ab741f7117600 
>   docs/images/CompletedTasks.png PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/images/HelloWorldJob.png 7a8957594348ac227c8860d57c8d7b8365a67749 
>   docs/images/RoleJobs.png d41ee0bc1e6dfbc42d50e4a675dda0a47e1f1cd2 
>   docs/images/RunningJob.png PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/images/ScheduledJobs.png 21bfcae2f636d2032c30c63f91df08d6fa1b65ad 
>   docs/images/TaskBreakdown.png 125a4e9e07fe66c680a4c39388938ac5ed593c5e 
>   docs/images/aurora_logo.png abcfbb840ba610f752bbcd2db47fb46c984822f3 
>   docs/images/killedtask.png b173698ef83e52ea19b818e6d06da9211f5cc637 
>   docs/images/runningtask.png 7f7553cc9d06204b8ea12b01b275def586d0499f 
>   docs/images/stderr.png b83ccfa36850c080a00faf139e13b0252ec4f21c 
>   docs/images/stdout.png fb4e0b7b7550e98011ea5ced5738fdc01c2ff731 
>   docs/tools.md c14aa2e5a00f72dff11d68e2600923925af6809c 
>   docs/tutorial.md 1bdc1ca3f3cc87efd27a517c6d54d58a03ceee71 
>   examples/vagrant/test_tutorial.sh 4628241d7baa507fc17414d7cdb40e76e6d609a5 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/41844/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Rendered version is available at https://github.com/StephanErb/aurora/blob/docu-update/docs/tutorial.md
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Stephan Erb
> 
>