svn commit: r1058360 - /subversion/site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.7.html

[st...@apache.org]

Author: stsp
Date: Wed Jan 12 23:56:55 2011
New Revision: 1058360

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1058360&view=rev
Log:
* publish/docs/release-notes/1.7.html
  (output-changes): wording tweak

Modified:
    subversion/site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.7.html

Modified: subversion/site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.7.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/subversion/site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.7.html?rev=1058360&r1=1058359&r2=1058360&view=diff
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--- subversion/site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.7.html (original)
+++ subversion/site/publish/docs/release-notes/1.7.html Wed Jan 12 23:56:55 2011
@@ -181,13 +181,13 @@ example illustrates these changes.</p>
 -->
 
 <div class="h4" id="multi-update">
-<h4>Improved output of <code>svn update</code> for multiple update targets
+<h4>Improved output of <code>svn update</code> for multiple working copies
   <a class="sectionlink" href="#multi-update"
     title="Link to this section">&para;</a>
 </h4>
 
-<p>The output of <code>svn update</code> for multiple targets has been
-made less confusing (see
+<p>The output of <code>svn update</code> when updating multiple working
+copies has been made less confusing (see
 <a href="http://subversion.tigris.org/issues/show_bug.cgi?id=3693"
   >issue #3693</a>). Below is an example of the new output:</p>