[GitHub] [flink] Shawn-Hx commented on a change in pull request #13664: [FLINK-19673] Translate "Standalone Cluster" page into Chinese

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Shawn-Hx commented on a change in pull request #13664:
URL: https://github.com/apache/flink/pull/13664#discussion_r511723364



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File path: docs/ops/deployment/cluster_setup.zh.md
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@@ -100,52 +105,60 @@ configuration files (which need to be accessible at the same path on all machine
 </div>
 </div>
 
-The Flink directory must be available on every worker under the same path. You can use a shared NFS directory, or copy the entire Flink directory to every worker node.
+Flink 目录必须放在所有 worker 节点的相同目录下。你可以使用共享的 NFS 目录，或将 Flink 目录复制到每个 worker 节点上。
 
-Please see the [configuration page](../config.html) for details and additional configuration options.
+请参考 [配置参数页面]({% link ops/config.zh.md %}) 获取更多细节以及额外的配置项。
 
-In particular,
+特别地，
 
- * the amount of available memory per JobManager (`jobmanager.memory.process.size`),
- * the amount of available memory per TaskManager (`taskmanager.memory.process.size` and check [memory setup guide](../memory/mem_tuning.html#configure-memory-for-standalone-deployment)),
- * the number of available CPUs per machine (`taskmanager.numberOfTaskSlots`),
- * the total number of CPUs in the cluster (`parallelism.default`) and
- * the temporary directories (`io.tmp.dirs`)
+* 每个 JobManager 的可用内存值（`jobmanager.memory.process.size`），
+* 每个 TaskManager 的可用内存值 （`taskmanager.memory.process.size`，并检查 [内存调优指南]({% link ops/memory/mem_tuning.zh.md %}#configure-memory-for-standalone-deployment)），
+* 每台机器的可用 CPU 数（`taskmanager.numberOfTaskSlots`），
+* 集群中所有 CPU 数（`parallelism.default`）和
+* 临时目录（`io.tmp.dirs`）
 
-are very important configuration values.
+的值都是非常重要的配置项。
 
 {% top %}
 
-### Starting Flink
+<a name="starting-flink"></a>
 
-The following script starts a JobManager on the local node and connects via SSH to all worker nodes listed in the *workers* file to start the TaskManager on each node. Now your Flink system is up and running. The JobManager running on the local node will now accept jobs at the configured RPC port.
+### 启动 Flink
 
-Assuming that you are on the master node and inside the Flink directory:
+下面的脚本在本地节点启动了一个 JobManager 并通过 SSH 连接到 *workers* 文件中所有的 worker 节点，在每个节点上启动 TaskManager。现在你的 Flink 系统已经启动并运行着。在本地节点上运行的 JobManager 会在配置的 RPC 端口上接收作业。

Review comment:
       这里的原文为 “The JobManager running on the local node will now accept jobs at the configured RPC port.”
   是否可以翻译成：“在本地节点上运行的 JobManager 会通过配置的 RPC 端口接收提交的作业。”
   或者意译为：“可以通过配置的 RPC 端口向本地节点上的 JobManager 提交作业。”
   这两种哪个更好一点?




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