[incubator-devlake-website] branch main updated: fix: tweaked some copywriting on homepage

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The following commit(s) were added to refs/heads/main by this push:
     new a48ffc037 fix: tweaked some copywriting on homepage
a48ffc037 is described below

commit a48ffc0376c2f81c104cc15cb038be4ae8694c70
Author: yumengwang03 <yu...@merico.dev>
AuthorDate: Thu Sep 15 23:48:10 2022 +0800

    fix: tweaked some copywriting on homepage
---
 src/components/Sections/Discover.tsx      | 2 +-
 src/components/Sections/JoinCommunity.tsx | 2 +-
 src/components/Sections/UseCases.tsx      | 4 ++--
 src/components/Sections/UserFlow.tsx      | 2 +-
 src/components/Sections/WhyDevlake.tsx    | 4 ++--
 5 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/components/Sections/Discover.tsx b/src/components/Sections/Discover.tsx
index 5b938ff4a..adb61b400 100644
--- a/src/components/Sections/Discover.tsx
+++ b/src/components/Sections/Discover.tsx
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ export function Discover() {
       sm:mt-5 sm:text-center sm:text-heading3 sm:leading-[30px]
       ">Discover more engineering <br className="hidden sm:block" /> insights with</div>
     <div className="font-semibold text-primary-500 text-[40px] leading-[60px] mt-1 mb-3
-      sm:text-label24 sm:leading-[30px] sm:text-center sm:whitespace-nowrap">Apache DevLake (Incubating)</div>
+      sm:text-label24 sm:leading-[30px] sm:text-center sm:whitespace-nowrap">Apache DevLake</div>
     <Link
       className="primary-button z-10 sm:flex sm:w-[137px] sm:h-5 sm:p-[0px] 
       whitespace-nowrap sm:mx-auto sm:rounded-[5px] sm:mb-4"
diff --git a/src/components/Sections/JoinCommunity.tsx b/src/components/Sections/JoinCommunity.tsx
index c51bfbc27..49baaddad 100644
--- a/src/components/Sections/JoinCommunity.tsx
+++ b/src/components/Sections/JoinCommunity.tsx
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ export function JoinCommunity() {
       <div className="text-heading1 mb-3 text-primary-800 font-semibold
         sm:text-heading2">Join the Community</div>
       <div className="text-label18 mb-4 text-neutral-500
-        sm:text-label16 sm:mb-3">Join our community to stay up to date on the latest news, ask and answer questions, make contributions, and connect with fellow community members!</div>
+        sm:text-label16 sm:mb-3">Join our community to stay up to date with the latest news, ask and answer questions, make contributions, and connect with fellow community members!</div>
       <div className="text-label16 space-y-[8px] flex flex-col">
         <InlineLink link="https://join.slack.com/t/devlake-io/shared_invite/zt-17b6vuvps-x98pqseoUagM7EAmKC82xQ">Join Slack</InlineLink>
         <InlineLink link="https://devlake.apache.org/community/subscribe">Subscribe to Mailing List</InlineLink>
diff --git a/src/components/Sections/UseCases.tsx b/src/components/Sections/UseCases.tsx
index 40e31214d..7a7072b6c 100644
--- a/src/components/Sections/UseCases.tsx
+++ b/src/components/Sections/UseCases.tsx
@@ -61,14 +61,14 @@ export function UseCases() {
           <UCCard
             lead="Product Managers"
             title="Dev Workflow Improvement"
-            desc="Align sprint planning with high-level goals and ensure the development progress is on track with metrics that help with improving the workflow."
+            desc="Align sprint planning with high-level goals and ensure the development progress is on track."
           >
             <UCIcon src={UC2} />
           </UCCard>
           <UCCard
             lead="Tech Leads"
             title="Bring out the Best in Your Team"
-            desc="Gain insights into the development and delivery process. Remove blockers and risks to establish best practices."
+            desc="Gain insights into the development process to establish best practices by removing blockers and risks."
           >
             <UCIcon src={UC3} />
           </UCCard>
diff --git a/src/components/Sections/UserFlow.tsx b/src/components/Sections/UserFlow.tsx
index 7cf4a7b26..49ecfc98c 100644
--- a/src/components/Sections/UserFlow.tsx
+++ b/src/components/Sections/UserFlow.tsx
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ export function UserFlow() {
           icon={<UF3 width={40} height={40} />}
           text="View Dashboards"
         >
-          <InlineLink link="https://devlake.apache.org/docs/LiveDemo">View dashboards</InlineLink> pre-built for a variety of use cases and learn engineering insights from the <InlineLink link="https://devlake.apache.org/docs/Metrics">metrics</InlineLink>.
+          <InlineLink link="https://devlake.apache.org/docs/LiveDemo">View pre-built dashboards</InlineLink> of a variety of use cases and learn engineering insights from the <InlineLink link="https://devlake.apache.org/docs/Metrics">metrics</InlineLink>.
         </Card>
         <Arrow />
         <Card
diff --git a/src/components/Sections/WhyDevlake.tsx b/src/components/Sections/WhyDevlake.tsx
index 8b49ac83e..8f9ac7705 100644
--- a/src/components/Sections/WhyDevlake.tsx
+++ b/src/components/Sections/WhyDevlake.tsx
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ export function WhyDevlake() {
     <span
       className="section-title text-center"
     >
-      Why Apache DevLake (Incubating)
+      Why Apache DevLake
     </span>
     <div
       className=" flex flex-col
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ export function WhyDevlake() {
           <C.TextDescription>
             Collect DevOps data from tools across the entire Software Development Life Cycle (SDLC) and connect siloed data with a standard data model.
             <br />
-            <C.TextLink link="https://devlake.apache.org/docs/DataSupport">Explore supported data sources</C.TextLink>
+            <C.TextLink link="https://devlake.apache.org/docs/SupportedDataSources">Explore supported data sources</C.TextLink>
           </C.TextDescription>
         </C.TextSection>
       </Feature>