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[GitHub] [db-jdo] clr-apache opened a new pull request #23: Jdo 709 spec

clr-apache opened a new pull request #23:
URL: https://github.com/apache/db-jdo/pull/23


   Updated specification changes for final review of JDO-709.


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[GitHub] [db-jdo] tzaeschke commented on pull request #23: Jdo 709 spec

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
tzaeschke commented on pull request #23:
URL: https://github.com/apache/db-jdo/pull/23#issuecomment-855284340


   Correction: never mind about the empty bullet in Chapter 14, page 15, it does show up in OpenOffice.
   I was using LibreOffice which just showed nothing.


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[GitHub] [db-jdo] clr-apache merged pull request #23: Jdo 709 spec

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
clr-apache merged pull request #23:
URL: https://github.com/apache/db-jdo/pull/23


   


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[GitHub] [db-jdo] tzaeschke edited a comment on pull request #23: Jdo 709 spec

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
tzaeschke edited a comment on pull request #23:
URL: https://github.com/apache/db-jdo/pull/23#issuecomment-855283591


   Some comments:
   * Chapter 6: Would it make sense to relabel "Converted Classes" to "Convertible Classes" or "Convertible Types"? In my mind the converted type (a primitive, not a class) is stored in the datastore. The application/domain type is in my mind the un-converted type.
   * Chapter 14, page 8: Change "... subsequent execute method" to "subsequent execution" or "subsequently called execute method"?
   * ~~Chapter 14, page 15: The last two change just appear to add an empty bullet?~~
   * Chapter 19.1.4, page 4: The first line of the javadoc comment is missing a linebreak after `/**`: `/** * The`
   * Chapter 19.1.5, page 5: The first line of the javadoc comment is missing a linebreak after `/**`: `/** * The`


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[GitHub] [db-jdo] tzaeschke commented on pull request #23: Jdo 709 spec

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
tzaeschke commented on pull request #23:
URL: https://github.com/apache/db-jdo/pull/23#issuecomment-855283591


   Some comments:
   * Chapter 6: Would it make sense to relabel "Converted Classes" to "Convertible Classes" or "Convertible Types"? In my mind the converted type (a primitive, not a class) is stored in the datastore. The application/domain type is in my mind the un-converted type.
   * Chapter 14, page 8: Change "... subsequent execute method" to "subsequent execution" or "subsequently called execute method"?
   * Chapter 14, page 15: The last two change just appear to add an empty bullet?
   * Chapter 19.1.4, page 4: The first line of the javadoc comment is missing a linebreak after `/**`: `/** * The`
   * Chapter 19.1.5, page 5: The first line of the javadoc comment is missing a linebreak after `/**`: `/** * The`


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