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[camel] branch master updated: Proofread README file with multiple fixes

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     new 26f43d8  Proofread README file with multiple fixes
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commit 26f43d814dcc0bc5ec4eb7d6408e4dc91d066180
Author: Addy Roy <57...@users.noreply.github.com>
AuthorDate: Wed Oct 14 17:18:34 2020 -0400

    Proofread README file with multiple fixes
    
    Corrected typo, grammatical, punctuations at multiple places in the file: Improved readability, language coherence to benefit the prospective readers.
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 README.md | 42 +++++++++++++++++++++---------------------
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 40da282..79f99b2 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -7,24 +7,24 @@
 [![Master Build](https://github.com/apache/camel/workflows/build/badge.svg)](https://github.com/apache/camel/actions?query=workflow%3A%22build%22)
 [![Twitter](https://img.shields.io/twitter/follow/ApacheCamel.svg?label=Follow&style=social)](https://twitter.com/ApacheCamel)
 
-[Apache Camel](http://camel.apache.org/) is a powerful open-source integration framework based on known
+[Apache Camel](http://camel.apache.org/) is a powerful, open-source integration framework based on prevalent 
 Enterprise Integration Patterns with powerful bean integration.
 
 ### Introduction
 
-Camel lets you create the Enterprise Integration Patterns to implement routing
-and mediation rules in either a Java based Domain Specific Language (or Fluent API),
+Camel enables the creation of the Enterprise Integration Patterns to implement routing
+and mediation rules in either a Java-based Domain Specific Language (or Fluent API),
 via Spring or Blueprint based Xml Configuration files, or via the Scala DSL.
-This means you get smart completion of routing rules in your IDE whether
+That means you get smart completion of routing rules in your IDE whether
 in your Java, Scala, or XML editor.
 
-Apache Camel uses URIs so that it can easily work directly with any kind of
-transport or messaging model such as HTTP, ActiveMQ, JMS, JBI, SCA, MINA
+Apache Camel uses URIs to enable easier integration with all kinds of
+transport or messaging model including HTTP, ActiveMQ, JMS, JBI, SCA, MINA
 or CXF together with working with pluggable Data Format options.
 Apache Camel is a small library that has minimal dependencies for easy embedding
-in any Java application. Apache Camel lets you work with the same API regardless
-of which kind of transport used, so learn the API once and you will be able to
-interact with all the Components that are provided out-of-the-box.
+in any Java application. Apache Camel lets you work with the same API regardless of the 
+transport type, making it possible to interact with all the components provided out-of-the-box, 
+with a good understanding of the API.
 
 Apache Camel has powerful Bean Binding and integrated seamlessly with
 popular frameworks such as Spring, CDI, and Blueprint.
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ unit test your routes.
 
 ## Components
 
-Apache Camel comes with a lot of artifacts with components, data formats, languages, and various other kinds.
+Apache Camel comes alongside several artifacts with components, data formats, languages, and kinds.
 The up to date list is available online at the Camel website:
 
 * Components: <https://camel.apache.org/components/latest/>
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ To help you get started, try the following links:
 
 <http://camel.apache.org/getting-started.html>
 
-It is also recommended to get started by trying out some of the beginner examples.
+The beginner examples are another powerful alternative pathway for getting started with Apache Camel.
 
 * Examples: <https://github.com/apache/camel-examples/tree/master/examples#welcome-to-the-apache-camel-examples>
 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ It is also recommended to get started by trying out some of the beginner example
 
 **Contributions**
 
-We welcome contributions of all kinds, for details of how you can help
+We welcome all kinds of contributions, the details of which are specified here:
 
 <https://github.com/apache/camel/blob/master/CONTRIBUTING.md>
 
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ Github (source): <https://github.com/apache/camel>
 
 Issue tracker: <https://issues.apache.org/jira/projects/CAMEL>
 
-Mailing list: <http://camel.apache.org/mailing-lists.html>
+Mailing-list: <http://camel.apache.org/mailing-lists.html>
 
 Chat: <https://camel.zulipchat.com/>
 
@@ -92,13 +92,13 @@ Twitter: <https://twitter.com/ApacheCamel>
 
 **Support**
 
-If you need support or help then read this page first
+For additional help, support, we recommend referencing this page first:
 
 <http://camel.apache.org/support.html>
 
 **Getting Help**
 
-If you hit any problems please talk to us on either StackOverflow, Chat, or the email mailing list.
+If you get stuck somewhere, please feel free to reach out to us on either StackOverflow, Chat, or the email mailing list.
 
 Please help us make Apache Camel better - we appreciate any feedback
 you may have.
@@ -110,20 +110,20 @@ The Camel riders!
 
 # Licensing
 
-This software is licensed under the terms you may find in the file
-named `LICENSE.txt` in this directory.
+The terms for software licensing are detailed in the `LICENSE.txt` file,  
+located in the working directory.
 
 This distribution includes cryptographic software.  The country in
-which you currently reside may have restrictions on the import,
-possession, use, and/or re-export to another country, of
+which you currently reside may levy restrictions on the import,
+possession, use, and re-export to foreign countries of
 encryption software.  BEFORE using any encryption software, please
-check your country's laws, regulations and policies concerning the
+check your country's laws, regulations, and policies concerning the
 import, possession, or use, and re-export of encryption software, to
 see if this is permitted.  See <http://www.wassenaar.org/> for more
 information.
 
 The U.S. Government Department of Commerce, Bureau of Industry and
-Security (BIS), has classified this software as Export Commodity
+Security (BIS) has classified this software as Export Commodity
 Control Number (ECCN) 5D002.C.1, which includes information security
 software using or performing cryptographic functions with asymmetric
 algorithms.  The form and manner of this Apache Software Foundation