[GitHub] [pulsar] alpreu commented on a diff in pull request #16686: [fix][doc] Hotfix Pulsar IO docs

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alpreu commented on code in PR #16686:
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/16686#discussion_r926605573


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site2/docs/io-debug.md:
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@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ Use one of the following methods to get a connector log in localrun mode:
   
   ```
 
-To clearly explain the log information, here breaks down the large block of information into small blocks and add descriptions for each block.
+Following is a breakdown of the log into smaller blocks with descriptions to clearly explain the log information.

Review Comment:
   I agree but the problem with the original is that its English is not correct. Maybe we can improve on the wording?
   What do you think about this:
   ```
   To clearly explain the log information, the following is a breakdown into smaller blocks with added descriptions
   ```



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