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Posted to commits@cordova.apache.org by mw...@apache.org on 2013/11/04 20:53:12 UTC
[04/17] docs commit: [CB-3962] reduce 'ing' verbs
[CB-3962] reduce 'ing' verbs
Conflicts:
docs/en/edge/guide/cli/index.md
Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/commit/7152b84d
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/tree/7152b84d
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/diff/7152b84d
Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: 7152b84d9762a8b0e784576efbcbd7ef66dd647b
Parents: 7803b12
Author: Mike Sierra <ms...@adobe.com>
Authored: Fri Nov 1 15:16:34 2013 -0400
Committer: Michael Brooks <mi...@michaelbrooks.ca>
Committed: Mon Nov 4 11:47:49 2013 -0800
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STYLESHEET.md | 4 +-
docs/en/edge/config_ref/index.md | 2 +-
docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/index.md | 2 +-
.../edge/guide/platforms/android/upgrading.md | 51 +++++++++++---------
.../edge/guide/platforms/blackberry10/tools.md | 2 +-
docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/wp8/upgrading.md | 2 +-
6 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/7152b84d/STYLESHEET.md
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diff --git a/STYLESHEET.md b/STYLESHEET.md
index 6d7ddfb..9e7604d 100644
--- a/STYLESHEET.md
+++ b/STYLESHEET.md
@@ -127,9 +127,9 @@ immensely.
E.g., "the pause event fires when..." rather than "the pause event
is fired when..." Rule of thumb: banish verbs ending in "ed".
-* __Not Kidding, Use Present Tense__: Minimize verbs ending with
+- __Not Kidding, Use Present Tense__: Minimize verbs ending with
"ing": "This is necessary to provide...", not "This is necessary for
- providing..."
+ providing..." <!-- are\s-+[a-z]+ing\b -->
* __Use Action Verbs__: Avoid weak verbs like "is" or "has." The
sentence in the item above could stand improvement.
http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/7152b84d/docs/en/edge/config_ref/index.md
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diff --git a/docs/en/edge/config_ref/index.md b/docs/en/edge/config_ref/index.md
index 67fd98b..70bf4f0 100644
--- a/docs/en/edge/config_ref/index.md
+++ b/docs/en/edge/config_ref/index.md
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ all of them:
If you use the CLI to build applications, you use the `plugin` command
to enable device APIs. This does not modify the top-level `config.xml`
file, so the `<feature>` element does not apply to your workflow. If
-you are working directly in an SDK and using the platform-specific
+you work directly in an SDK and using the platform-specific
`config.xml` file as source, you use the `<feature>` tag to enable
device-level APIs and external plugins. They typically appear in this
form:
http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/7152b84d/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/index.md
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diff --git a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/index.md b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/index.md
index 4e42f50..e42ee7f 100644
--- a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/index.md
+++ b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/index.md
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ application to the emulator from the command line:
$ cordova emulate android
-If instead you are working within Eclipse, right-click the project and
+If instead you work within Eclipse, right-click the project and
choose __Run As → Android Application__. You may be asked to
specify an AVD if none are already open.
http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/7152b84d/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/upgrading.md
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diff --git a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/upgrading.md b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/upgrading.md
index 2d28f3e..7f5f2ec 100644
--- a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/upgrading.md
+++ b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/android/upgrading.md
@@ -28,12 +28,13 @@ version of the CLI.
For projects that were created with the cordova CLI:
-1. Update the `cordova` CLI version - see The Command-line Interface
+1. Update the `cordova` CLI version. See The Command-line Interface.
+
2. Run `cordova platform update android`
For projects not created with the cordova CLI, run:
-1. `bin/update <project_path>`
+ bin/update <project_path>
## Upgrade to the CLI (3.0.0) from 2.9.0 ##
@@ -80,7 +81,9 @@ For projects not created with the cordova CLI, run:
2. Add `cordova-2.8.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
+
+<!-- SS Eclipse -->
4. Copy the new `cordova.js` into your project.
@@ -98,7 +101,7 @@ For projects not created with the cordova CLI, run:
2. Add `cordova-2.7.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-2.7.0.js` into your project.
@@ -116,7 +119,7 @@ For projects not created with the cordova CLI, run:
2. Add `cordova-2.6.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-2.6.0.js` into your project.
@@ -136,7 +139,7 @@ Run `bin/update <project>` with the project path listed in the Cordova Source di
2. Add `cordova-2.5.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-2.5.0.js` into your project.
@@ -154,7 +157,7 @@ Run `bin/update <project>` with the project path listed in the Cordova Source di
2. Add `cordova-2.4.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-2.4.0.js` into your project.
@@ -170,7 +173,7 @@ Run `bin/update <project>` with the project path listed in the Cordova Source di
2. Add `cordova-2.3.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-2.3.0.js` into your project.
@@ -186,7 +189,7 @@ Run `bin/update <project>` with the project path listed in the Cordova Source di
2. Add `cordova-2.2.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-2.2.0.js` into your project.
@@ -202,7 +205,7 @@ Run `bin/update <project>` with the project path listed in the Cordova Source di
2. Add `cordova-2.1.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-2.1.0.js` into your project.
@@ -218,7 +221,7 @@ Run `bin/update <project>` with the project path listed in the Cordova Source di
2. Add `cordova-2.0.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-2.0.0.js` into your project.
@@ -239,7 +242,7 @@ a future release.
2. Add `cordova-1.9.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-1.9.0.js` into your project.
@@ -261,7 +264,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `cordova-1.8.1.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-1.8.1.js` into your project.
@@ -275,7 +278,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `cordova-1.8.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-1.8.0.js` into your project.
@@ -289,7 +292,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `cordova-1.8.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-1.8.0.js` into your project.
@@ -303,7 +306,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `cordova-1.7.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-1.7.0.js` into your project.
@@ -315,7 +318,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `cordova-1.6.1.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-1.6.1.js` into your project.
@@ -327,7 +330,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `cordova-1.6.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-1.6.0.js` into your project.
@@ -343,7 +346,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `cordova-1.5.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `cordova-1.5.0.js` into your project.
@@ -359,7 +362,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `phonegap-1.4.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `phonegap-1.4.0.js` into your project.
@@ -375,7 +378,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `phonegap-1.3.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `phonegap-1.3.0.js` into your project.
@@ -391,7 +394,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `phonegap-1.2.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `phonegap-1.2.0.js` into your project.
@@ -407,7 +410,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `phonegap-1.1.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `phonegap-1.1.0.js` into your project.
@@ -421,7 +424,7 @@ maintainer and add this task to their bug tracker.
2. Add `phonegap-1.0.0.jar` to the project's `libs` directory.
-3. If you are using Eclipse, please refresh your eclipse project and do a clean.
+3. If you use Eclipse, please refresh your Eclipse project and do a clean.
4. Copy the new `phonegap-1.0.0.js` into your project.
http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/7152b84d/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/blackberry10/tools.md
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diff --git a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/blackberry10/tools.md b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/blackberry10/tools.md
index 26f5f11..9aedd7e 100644
--- a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/blackberry10/tools.md
+++ b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/blackberry10/tools.md
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ where
- `--pin <device-pin>` specifies the PIN of the BlackBerry device,
which identifies that device as a valid host for the debug
- token. This argument is required only if you are creating a debug
+ token. This argument is required only when creating a debug
token.
### Remove a target
http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/cordova-docs/blob/7152b84d/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/wp8/upgrading.md
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diff --git a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/wp8/upgrading.md b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/wp8/upgrading.md
index 381dbf3..ad929a3 100644
--- a/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/wp8/upgrading.md
+++ b/docs/en/edge/guide/platforms/wp8/upgrading.md
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ For projects that were created with the cordova CLI:
For projects not created with the cordova CLI, run:
-1. `bin\update <project_path>`
+ bin\update <project_path>
## Upgrade to the CLI (3.0.0) from 2.9.0 ##