[GitHub] [pulsar] Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5052: [doc] Improve Pulsar Security-token-admin

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Jennifer88huang commented on a change in pull request #5052: [doc] Improve Pulsar Security-token-admin
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5052#discussion_r319792718
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/security-token-admin.md
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 @@ -96,15 +95,15 @@ $ bin/pulsar tokens create --secret-key file:///path/to/my-secret.key \
 
 ## Authorization
 
-The token itself does not have any permission associated. The authorization engine determines whether the token should have permissions or not. Once you have created the token, one can grant permission for this token to do certain actions. For example:
+The token does not associate any permission. The authorization engine determines whether the token has permissions or not. Once you have created the token, you can grant permission for this token to do certain actions. For example:
 
 ```shell
 $ bin/pulsar-admin namespaces grant-permission my-tenant/my-namespace \
             --role test-user \
             --actions produce,consume
 ```
 
-## Enable Token Authentication ...
+## Enable token authentication
 
 Review comment:
   Refine it further.

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