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[GitHub] [dolphinscheduler] insist777 opened a new pull request, #11361: [doc] Refine the deployment documentation

insist777 opened a new pull request, #11361:
URL: https://github.com/apache/dolphinscheduler/pull/11361

   ## Purpose of the pull request
   
   Refine the deployment documentation.
   
   ## Brief change log
   
   Improve the document introduction of complement.
   
   ## Verify this pull request
   
   Verified by manual tests.


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[GitHub] [dolphinscheduler] zhongjiajie merged pull request #11361: [doc] Refine the deployment documentation

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
zhongjiajie merged PR #11361:
URL: https://github.com/apache/dolphinscheduler/pull/11361


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[GitHub] [dolphinscheduler] zhongjiajie commented on a diff in pull request #11361: [doc] Refine the deployment documentation

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
zhongjiajie commented on code in PR #11361:
URL: https://github.com/apache/dolphinscheduler/pull/11361#discussion_r941155715


##########
docs/docs/en/guide/installation/pseudo-cluster.md:
##########
@@ -83,6 +83,7 @@ each machine. You could find this file in the path `bin/env/install_env.sh` and
 # ---------------------------------------------------------
 # Due to the master, worker, and API server being deployed on a single node, the IP of the server is the machine IP or localhost
 ips="localhost"
+sshPort=${sshPort:-"22"}

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   sshPort="22"
   ```



##########
docs/docs/zh/guide/installation/pseudo-cluster.md:
##########
@@ -73,14 +73,15 @@ chmod 600 ~/.ssh/authorized_keys
 
 ### 修改 `install_env.sh` 文件
 
-文件 `install_env.sh` 描述了哪些机器将被安装 DolphinScheduler 以及每台机器对应安装哪些服务。您可以在路径 `bin/env/install_env.sh` 中找到此文件,配置详情如下。
+文件 `install_env.sh` 描述了哪些机器将被安装 DolphinScheduler 以及每台机器对应安装哪些服务。您可以在路径 `bin/env/install_env.sh` 中找到此文件,可通过以下方式更改env变量,export <ENV_NAME>=<VALUE>,配置详情如下。
 
 ```shell
 # ---------------------------------------------------------
 # INSTALL MACHINE
 # ---------------------------------------------------------
 # Due to the master, worker, and API server being deployed on a single node, the IP of the server is the machine IP or localhost
 ips="localhost"
+sshPort=${sshPort:-"22"}

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   sshPort="22"
   ```



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[GitHub] [dolphinscheduler] EricGao888 commented on a diff in pull request #11361: [doc] Refine the deployment documentation

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
EricGao888 commented on code in PR #11361:
URL: https://github.com/apache/dolphinscheduler/pull/11361#discussion_r940878809


##########
docs/docs/en/guide/installation/pseudo-cluster.md:
##########
@@ -83,6 +83,8 @@ each machine. You could find this file in the path `bin/env/install_env.sh` and
 # ---------------------------------------------------------
 # Due to the master, worker, and API server being deployed on a single node, the IP of the server is the machine IP or localhost
 ips="localhost"
+# Modify Configurationexport export sshPort="22"

Review Comment:
   We could remove this comment as we have already had it above.



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[GitHub] [dolphinscheduler] EricGao888 commented on a diff in pull request #11361: [doc] Refine the deployment documentation

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
EricGao888 commented on code in PR #11361:
URL: https://github.com/apache/dolphinscheduler/pull/11361#discussion_r940878439


##########
docs/docs/en/guide/installation/pseudo-cluster.md:
##########
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Go to the ZooKeeper installation directory, copy configure file `zoo_sample.cfg`
 ## Modify Configuration
 
 After completing the preparation of the basic environment, you need to modify the configuration file according to the
-environment you used. The configuration files are both in directory `bin/env` and named `install_env.sh` and `dolphinscheduler_env.sh`.
+environment you used.Env configuration can be changed in the following ways, export <ENV_NAME>=<VALUE>, The configuration files are both in directory `bin/env` and named `install_env.sh` and `dolphinscheduler_env.sh`.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   environment you used. Change environment configuration via `export <ENV_NAME>=<VALUE>`. The configuration files are located in directory `bin/env` as `install_env.sh` and `dolphinscheduler_env.sh`.
   ```



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[GitHub] [dolphinscheduler] zhongjiajie commented on a diff in pull request #11361: [doc] Refine the deployment documentation

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
zhongjiajie commented on code in PR #11361:
URL: https://github.com/apache/dolphinscheduler/pull/11361#discussion_r940939699


##########
docs/docs/en/guide/installation/pseudo-cluster.md:
##########
@@ -83,6 +83,8 @@ each machine. You could find this file in the path `bin/env/install_env.sh` and
 # ---------------------------------------------------------
 # Due to the master, worker, and API server being deployed on a single node, the IP of the server is the machine IP or localhost
 ips="localhost"
+# Modify Configurationexport export sshPort="22"

Review Comment:
   Agree with that



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[GitHub] [dolphinscheduler] zhongjiajie commented on a diff in pull request #11361: [doc] Refine the deployment documentation

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
zhongjiajie commented on code in PR #11361:
URL: https://github.com/apache/dolphinscheduler/pull/11361#discussion_r940828444


##########
docs/docs/en/guide/installation/pseudo-cluster.md:
##########
@@ -83,6 +83,8 @@ each machine. You could find this file in the path `bin/env/install_env.sh` and
 # ---------------------------------------------------------
 # Due to the master, worker, and API server being deployed on a single node, the IP of the server is the machine IP or localhost
 ips="localhost"
+# Modify Configurationexport sshPort="22"

Review Comment:
   Not this place, I mean we should maybe add some sentences in L79 or L144, to tell users they can change env variable by `export <ENV_NAME>=<VALUE>`



##########
docs/docs/en/guide/installation/pseudo-cluster.md:
##########
@@ -83,6 +83,8 @@ each machine. You could find this file in the path `bin/env/install_env.sh` and
 # ---------------------------------------------------------
 # Due to the master, worker, and API server being deployed on a single node, the IP of the server is the machine IP or localhost
 ips="localhost"
+# Modify Configurationexport sshPort="22"

Review Comment:
   Others LGTM



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[GitHub] [dolphinscheduler] EricGao888 commented on a diff in pull request #11361: [doc] Refine the deployment documentation

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
EricGao888 commented on code in PR #11361:
URL: https://github.com/apache/dolphinscheduler/pull/11361#discussion_r940832220


##########
docs/docs/zh/guide/installation/pseudo-cluster.md:
##########
@@ -81,6 +81,8 @@ chmod 600 ~/.ssh/authorized_keys
 # ---------------------------------------------------------
 # Due to the master, worker, and API server being deployed on a single node, the IP of the server is the machine IP or localhost
 ips="localhost"
+# Modify Configurationexport sshPort="22"

Review Comment:
   Do you mean `# Modify Configuration export sshPort="22"`?



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[GitHub] [dolphinscheduler] EricGao888 commented on a diff in pull request #11361: [doc] Refine the deployment documentation

Posted by GitBox <gi...@apache.org>.
EricGao888 commented on code in PR #11361:
URL: https://github.com/apache/dolphinscheduler/pull/11361#discussion_r940878439


##########
docs/docs/en/guide/installation/pseudo-cluster.md:
##########
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Go to the ZooKeeper installation directory, copy configure file `zoo_sample.cfg`
 ## Modify Configuration
 
 After completing the preparation of the basic environment, you need to modify the configuration file according to the
-environment you used. The configuration files are both in directory `bin/env` and named `install_env.sh` and `dolphinscheduler_env.sh`.
+environment you used.Env configuration can be changed in the following ways, export <ENV_NAME>=<VALUE>, The configuration files are both in directory `bin/env` and named `install_env.sh` and `dolphinscheduler_env.sh`.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   environment you used. Change the environment configurations via `export <ENV_NAME>=<VALUE>`. The configuration files are located in directory `bin/env` as `install_env.sh` and `dolphinscheduler_env.sh`.
   ```



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