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-Apache CloudStack is designed to deploy and manage large networks of virtual machines, as a highly available, highly scalable Infrastructure as a Service cloud computing platform. CloudStack current supports the most popular hypervisors VMware, Oracle VM, KVM, XenServer and Xen Cloud Platform, as well as managing bare metal. 
+#What is CloudStack?
 
+Apache CloudStack (Incubating) is software designed to deploy and manage large networks of virtual machines, as a highly available, highly scalable Infrastructure as a Service (IaaS) cloud computing platform. CloudStack is used by a number of service providers to offer public cloud services, and by many companies to provide an on-premises (private) cloud offering.
 
+Apache CloudStack currently supports the most popular hypervisors: VMware, Oracle VM, KVM, XenServer and Xen Cloud Platform. CloudStack also offers bare metal management of servers, using PXE to provision OS images and IPMI to manage the server.
 
+CloudStack [was proposed][1] by Citrix to the Apache Software Foundation in early April and [accepted as a podling project][2] on Monday April 16th. 
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 ## Disclaimer
 
 Apache CloudStack is an effort undergoing incubation at The Apache Software Foundation (ASF).
 
 Incubation is required of all newly accepted projects until a further review indicates that the infrastructure, communications, and decision making process have stabilized in a manner consistent with other successful ASF projects. While incubation status is not necessarily a reflection of the completeness or stability of the code, it does indicate that the project has yet to be fully endorsed by the ASF.
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+  [1]: http://www.citrix.com/English/NE/news/news.asp?newsID=2323072 "Citrix Unveils Next Phase of CloudStack Strategy"
+  [2]: http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/incubator-general/201204.mbox/%3C61AE1E2837A06D4A8E98B796183842D40104425456DF%40SJCPMAILBOX01.citrite.net%3E "[RESULT][VOTE] CloudStack for Apache Incubator"
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