[GitHub] [comdev-site] cottage14 opened a new pull request, #112: Update _index.md

["cottage14 (via GitHub)" <gi...@apache.org>]

cottage14 opened a new pull request, #112:
URL: https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/pull/112

   lines 26, 30, 40: removed unnecessary comma
   38: capitalized 'Board' to match use later in the page
   40: changed 'are' to 'is'; navigating gender-free pronouns can be tricky while trying to maintain a readable sentence.
   48: removed 'a number of' as unnecessary
   56 and 80: changed passive to active voice
   74: changed 'who' to 'whom'


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[GitHub] [comdev-site] rbowen merged pull request #112: Update _index.md

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rbowen merged PR #112:
URL: https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/pull/112


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