[GitHub] [dolphinscheduler] EricGao888 commented on a diff in pull request #11326: [Fix-11217] [Doc] add postgresql config in doc: datasource-setting

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EricGao888 commented on code in PR #11326:
URL: https://github.com/apache/dolphinscheduler/pull/11326#discussion_r962342313


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docs/docs/en/guide/howto/datasource-setting.md:
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@@ -19,8 +22,10 @@ export SPRING_DATASOURCE_PASSWORD={password}
 
 ## Pseudo-Cluster/Cluster Initialize the Database
 
-DolphinScheduler metadata is stored in the relational database. Currently, supports PostgreSQL and MySQL. If you use MySQL, you need to manually download [mysql-connector-java driver][mysql] (8.0.16) and move it to the libs directory of DolphinScheduler
-which is `api-server/libs/` and `alert-server/libs` and `master-server/libs` and `worker-server/libs` and `tools/libs`. Let's take MySQL as an example for how to initialize the database:
+DolphinScheduler metadata is stored in the relational database. Currently, supports PostgreSQL and MySQL. Let's walk through how to initialize the database in MySQL and PostgreSQL :

Review Comment:
   In tech writing, we usually avoid `passive voice` unless necessary.



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docs/docs/en/guide/howto/datasource-setting.md:
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@@ -19,8 +22,10 @@ export SPRING_DATASOURCE_PASSWORD={password}
 
 ## Pseudo-Cluster/Cluster Initialize the Database
 
-DolphinScheduler metadata is stored in the relational database. Currently, supports PostgreSQL and MySQL. If you use MySQL, you need to manually download [mysql-connector-java driver][mysql] (8.0.16) and move it to the libs directory of DolphinScheduler
-which is `api-server/libs/` and `alert-server/libs` and `master-server/libs` and `worker-server/libs` and `tools/libs`. Let's take MySQL as an example for how to initialize the database:
+DolphinScheduler metadata is stored in the relational database. Currently, supports PostgreSQL and MySQL. Let's walk through how to initialize the database in MySQL and PostgreSQL :

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   DolphinScheduler stores metadata in `relational database`. Currently, we support `PostgreSQL` and `MySQL`. Let's walk through how to initialize the database in `MySQL` and `PostgreSQL` :
   ```



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docs/docs/zh/guide/howto/datasource-setting.md:
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@@ -19,8 +21,10 @@ export SPRING_DATASOURCE_PASSWORD={password}
 
 ## 伪分布式/分布式安装初始化数据库
 
-DolphinScheduler 元数据存储在关系型数据库中，目前支持 PostgreSQL 和 MySQL，如果使用 MySQL 则需要手动下载 [mysql-connector-java 驱动][mysql] (8.0.16) 并移动到 DolphinScheduler 的每个模块的 libs 目录下
-其中包括 `api-server/libs/` 和 `alert-server/libs` 和 `master-server/libs` 和 `worker-server/libs` 和 `tools/libs`。下面以 MySQL 为例，说明如何初始化数据库
+DolphinScheduler 元数据存储在关系型数据库中，目前支持 PostgreSQL 和 MySQL。下面分别介绍如何使用 MySQL 和 PostgresQL 初始化数据库.

Review Comment:
   ```suggestion
   DolphinScheduler 元数据存储在关系型数据库中，目前支持 PostgreSQL 和 MySQL。下面分别介绍如何使用 MySQL 和 PostgresQL 初始化数据库。
   ```



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