svn commit: r883226 - in /websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk: cgi-bin/ content/ content/product/draw.html

[bu...@apache.org]

Author: buildbot
Date: Sat Oct 19 01:23:36 2013
New Revision: 883226

Log:
Staging update by buildbot for ooo-site

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    websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/cgi-bin/   (props changed)
    websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/   (props changed)
    websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/draw.html

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Modified: websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/draw.html
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--- websites/staging/ooo-site/trunk/content/product/draw.html (original)
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     <h1 class="title">Apache OpenOffice Draw</h1>
     <p class="rfloatimg"><a href="/product/pix/draw-big.png" title="Click for bigger version"><img alt="Screendump of Apache OpenOffice Draw" src="/product/pix/draw.png" /></a></p>
-<p><em>The powerful graphics package</em></p>
-<p><strong>Draw</strong> - from a quick sketch to a complex plan, <strong>Draw</strong> gives you the tools
+<p><em>Makes drawing business processes and diagrams a snap!</em></p>
+<p><strong>Draw</strong> - from a quick sketch to a complex plan, Draw gives you the tools
 to communicate with graphics and diagrams. With a maximum page size of 300cm by
-300cm, <strong>Draw</strong> is powerful tool for technical or general posters, etc.</p>
+300cm, Draw is powerful tool for technical or general posters, etc.</p>
 <p>'Park' your most commonly used drawing tools around your screen ready for
 single-click access.</p>
 <p>Use <em>Styles and Formatting</em> to put all your graphics styles at your finger tips.</p>
-<p>Manipulate objects, rotate in two or three dimensions; the <em>3D controller</em> puts
-spheres, rings, cubes, etc. at your disposal.</p>
-<p><em>Arrange objects</em>: group, ungroup, regroup, and edit objects while grouped.
+<p><em>Manipulate objects</em>, rotate in two or three dimensions; the <em>3D controller</em> allows you to create
+spheres, rings, cubes, etc. in a quick pinch.</p>
+<p><em>Arrange objects</em>, group, ungroup, regroup, and edit objects while grouped.
 Sophisticated <em>rendering</em> let you create photorealistic images with your own
 texture, lighting effects, transparency, perspective, and so on.</p>
 <p><em>Smart connectors</em> make short work of flowcharts, organization charts, network
 diagrams, etc. Define your own 'glue points' for connectors to 'stick' to.</p>
 <p><em>Dimension lines</em> automatically calculate and display linear dimensions as you
 draw.</p>
-<p>Use the picture <em>Gallery</em> for clipart; create your own art and add it to the
+<p>Use the picture <em>Gallery</em> for clipart; you can also create your own art and add it to the
 Gallery.</p>
 <p>Save your graphics in OpenDocument format, the new international standard for
-office documents. This XML based format means you're not tied in to <strong>Draw</strong>.
+office documents. This XML based format means you're not tied into using Draw.
 You can access your graphics from any OpenDocument compliant software.</p>
 <p><em>Import graphics</em> from all common formats (including BMP, GIF, JPEG, PNG, TIFF,
 and WMF).</p>
-<p>Use <strong>Draw</strong>'s free ability to create Flash (.swf) versions of your work.</p>
+<p>Use Draw's free feature to create Flash (.swf) versions of your work.</p>
   </div>
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