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svn commit: r1528095 - in /cloudstack/site/trunk/content: about.mdtext bylaws.mdtext cloudstack-faq.mdtext contribute.mdtext docs/api/index.mdtext downloads.mdtext mailing-lists.mdtext security.mdtext who.mdtext

Author: chipchilders
Date: Tue Oct  1 13:53:47 2013
New Revision: 1528095

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1528095
Log:
Fixing typos thanks to tgraham

Modified:
    cloudstack/site/trunk/content/about.mdtext
    cloudstack/site/trunk/content/bylaws.mdtext
    cloudstack/site/trunk/content/cloudstack-faq.mdtext
    cloudstack/site/trunk/content/contribute.mdtext
    cloudstack/site/trunk/content/docs/api/index.mdtext
    cloudstack/site/trunk/content/downloads.mdtext
    cloudstack/site/trunk/content/mailing-lists.mdtext
    cloudstack/site/trunk/content/security.mdtext
    cloudstack/site/trunk/content/who.mdtext

Modified: cloudstack/site/trunk/content/about.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/cloudstack/site/trunk/content/about.mdtext?rev=1528095&r1=1528094&r2=1528095&view=diff
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--- cloudstack/site/trunk/content/about.mdtext (original)
+++ cloudstack/site/trunk/content/about.mdtext Tue Oct  1 13:53:47 2013
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Title: About Apache CloudStack
 
 <div class="page-header">
 
-<h1 id="indicators">About Apache CloudStack</h1>
+<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack: About</h1>
 
 </div>
 
@@ -24,20 +24,20 @@ CloudStack provides an open and flexible
 
 Apache CloudStack is a Java-based project that provides a management server and agents (if needed) for hypervisor hosts so that you can run an IaaS cloud. Some, but not all, of the features and functionality provided by CloudStack:
 
-- Works with hosts running XenServer/XCP, KVM, and/or VMware ESXi with vSphere.
-- Provides a friendly Web-based UI for managing the cloud.
-- Provides a native [API](/docs/api/). 
-- May provide an Amazon S3/EC2 compatible API (optional).
-- Manages storage for instances running on the hypervisors (primary storage) as well as templates, snapshots, and ISO images (secondary storage). 
-- Orchestrates network services from the data link layer (L2) to some application layer (L7) services, such as DHCP, NAT, firewall, VPN, and so on.
-- Accounting of network, compute, and storage resources. 
-- Multi-tenancy/account separation. 
-- User management.
+- Works with hosts running XenServer/XCP, KVM, and/or VMware ESXi with vSphere
+- Provides a friendly Web-based UI for managing the cloud
+- Provides a native [API](/docs/api/)
+- May provide an Amazon S3/EC2 compatible API (optional)
+- Manages storage for instances running on the hypervisors (primary storage) as well as templates, snapshots, and ISO images (secondary storage)
+- Orchestrates network services from the data link layer (L2) to some application layer (L7) services, such as DHCP, NAT, firewall, VPN, and so on
+- Accounting of network, compute, and storage resources
+- Multi-tenancy/account separation
+- User management
 
 In short, organizations can use Apache CloudStack to deploy a full-featured public or private IaaS cloud.
 
 # People of Apache CloudStack
 
-Apache projects are managed by a [Project Management Committee](http://www.apache.org/dev/pmc.html#what-is-a-pmc) (PMC), and much of the work is done by the project's [committers](http://www.apache.org/dev/committers.html). Note that committer status is *not* limited to developers, but is conferred to individuals who have made sustained contributions of high quality, and have shown a committment to mentoring other contributors and following the Apache Way.
+Apache projects are managed by a [Project Management Committee](http://www.apache.org/dev/pmc.html#what-is-a-pmc) (PMC), and much of the work is done by the project's [committers](http://www.apache.org/dev/committers.html). Note that committer status is *not* limited to developers, but is conferred to individuals who have made sustained contributions of high quality, and have shown a committment to mentoring other contributors and following [The Apache Way](http://theapacheway.com).
 
 The current Vice President of Apache CloudStack and chair of the PMC is Chip Childers, a full list of PMC members and contributors is available on the page *[Who We Are](/who.html)*.

Modified: cloudstack/site/trunk/content/bylaws.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/cloudstack/site/trunk/content/bylaws.mdtext?rev=1528095&r1=1528094&r2=1528095&view=diff
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--- cloudstack/site/trunk/content/bylaws.mdtext (original)
+++ cloudstack/site/trunk/content/bylaws.mdtext Tue Oct  1 13:53:47 2013
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Title: Apache CloudStack Project Bylaws
 
 <div class="page-header">
 
-<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack Project Bylaws</h1>
+<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack: Project Bylaws</h1>
 
 </div>
 

Modified: cloudstack/site/trunk/content/cloudstack-faq.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/cloudstack/site/trunk/content/cloudstack-faq.mdtext?rev=1528095&r1=1528094&r2=1528095&view=diff
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--- cloudstack/site/trunk/content/cloudstack-faq.mdtext (original)
+++ cloudstack/site/trunk/content/cloudstack-faq.mdtext Tue Oct  1 13:53:47 2013
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Title: Apache CloudStack FAQ
 
 <div class="page-header">
 
-<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack FAQ</h1>
+<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack: FAQ</h1>
 
 </div>
 
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ Have a question that's not answered here
 
 <a name="what"> </a>
 
-Apache CloudStack is a complete software suite</a> for creating Infrastructure as a Service (IaaS) clouds. Target environments include service providers and enterprises.
+Apache CloudStack is a complete software suite for creating Infrastructure as a Service (IaaS) clouds. Target environments include service providers and enterprises.
 
 - The Apache CloudStack platform enables service providers to set up an on-demand, elastic cloud computing service. It enables a utility computing service by allowing service providers to offer self-service virtual machine instances, storage volumes, and networking configurations over the Internet.
 - The Apache CloudStack platform enables enterprises to set up a private cloud for use by their own employees. The current generation of virtualization infrastructure targets enterprise IT departments who manage virtual machines the same way they would manage physical machines. The Apache CloudStack platform, on the other hand, enables self-service of virtual machines by users outside of the IT department. 
@@ -51,6 +51,6 @@ Administrators and end users can add tem
 
 <a name="users"> </a>
 
-Apache CloudStack users are assigned</a> accounts. An account is typically a customer of the service provider or a department in a large organization. Accounts are the unit of isolation in the cloud. Accounts are grouped by domains. Domains usually contain accounts that have some logical relationship to each other and a set of delegated administrators with some authority over the domain and its subdomains. For example, a service provider with several resellers could create a domain for each reseller.
+Apache CloudStack users are assigned accounts. An account is typically a customer of the service provider or a department in a large organization. Accounts are the unit of isolation in the cloud. Accounts are grouped by domains. Domains usually contain accounts that have some logical relationship to each other and a set of delegated administrators with some authority over the domain and its subdomains. For example, a service provider with several resellers could create a domain for each reseller.
 
 Multiple users can exist in an account.  Users are like aliases in the account.  Users in the same account are not isolated from each other.  Most installations need not surface the notion of users; they just have one user per account.

Modified: cloudstack/site/trunk/content/contribute.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/cloudstack/site/trunk/content/contribute.mdtext?rev=1528095&r1=1528094&r2=1528095&view=diff
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--- cloudstack/site/trunk/content/contribute.mdtext (original)
+++ cloudstack/site/trunk/content/contribute.mdtext Tue Oct  1 13:53:47 2013
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Title: Get Involved with Apache CloudStack
+Title: Apache CloudStack: Getting Involved
 
 <div class="row">
 
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Title: Get Involved with Apache CloudSta
 
 <div class="page-header">
 
-<h1 id="indicators">Getting Involved Apache CloudStack</h1>
+<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack: Getting Involved</h1>
 
 </div>
 
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Developers, of course, are also welcome.
 
 If you just want to report a bug, that's easily done in our [Jira bug tracking tool](https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CLOUDSTACK).
 
-##Where To Ask For Help
+## Where To Ask For Help
 
 Need some help getting started? Feel free to ask on the [mailing list](/mailing-lists.html) or find us on one of the following IRC channels on irc.freenode.net:
 

Modified: cloudstack/site/trunk/content/docs/api/index.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/cloudstack/site/trunk/content/docs/api/index.mdtext?rev=1528095&r1=1528094&r2=1528095&view=diff
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--- cloudstack/site/trunk/content/docs/api/index.mdtext (original)
+++ cloudstack/site/trunk/content/docs/api/index.mdtext Tue Oct  1 13:53:47 2013
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Title: Apache CloudStack API Documentati
 
 <div class="page-header">
 
-<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack API Documentation</h1>
+<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack: API Documentation</h1>
 
 </div>
 

Modified: cloudstack/site/trunk/content/downloads.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/cloudstack/site/trunk/content/downloads.mdtext?rev=1528095&r1=1528094&r2=1528095&view=diff
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--- cloudstack/site/trunk/content/downloads.mdtext (original)
+++ cloudstack/site/trunk/content/downloads.mdtext Tue Oct  1 13:53:47 2013
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Title: Apache CloudStack Downloads
 
 <div class="page-header">
 
-<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack 4.2.0</h1>
+<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack: Downloads</h1>
 
 </div>
 
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ To upgrade:
 
     $ pip install --upgrade cloudmonkey
 
-Thought a clean upgrade is recommended:
+Though a clean upgrade is recommended:
 
     $ pip uninstall cloudmonkey
     $ pip install cloudmonkey
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ Thought a clean upgrade is recommended:
 
 Releases of CloudStack as a Citrix project prior to the project's acceptance into the incubator can be found on SourceForge.net:
 
-Please note the the released listed below are NOT Apache project releases.  These links are being provided to the user community, as a convenience only.
+Please note the releases listed below are NOT Apache project releases.  These links are being provided to the user community, as a convenience only.
 
 - [Binaries for Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6.2 and CentOS 6.2](http://sourceforge.net/projects/cloudstack/files/CloudStack%20Acton/3.0.2/CloudStack-oss-3.0.2-1-rhel6.2.tar.gz/download)
 - [Binaries for Ubuntu 10.04 LTS](http://sourceforge.net/projects/cloudstack/files/CloudStack%20Acton/3.0.2/CloudStack-oss-3.0.2-1-ubuntu10.04.tar.gz/download)

Modified: cloudstack/site/trunk/content/mailing-lists.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/cloudstack/site/trunk/content/mailing-lists.mdtext?rev=1528095&r1=1528094&r2=1528095&view=diff
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--- cloudstack/site/trunk/content/mailing-lists.mdtext (original)
+++ cloudstack/site/trunk/content/mailing-lists.mdtext Tue Oct  1 13:53:47 2013
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Title: Apache CloudStack Mailing Lists
 
 <div class="page-header">
 
-<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack Mailing Lists</h1>
+<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack: Mailing Lists</h1>
 
 </div>
 
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Title: Apache CloudStack Mailing Lists
 
 </div>
 
-If you're interested in learning more or participating in the Apache CloudStack project, the mailing lists are the best way to do that. While the project has several communications channels, the mailing lists are the most active and the official channels for making decisions about the project itself. <em>["If it didn't happen on a mailing list, it didn't happen."](http://community.apache.org/newbiefaq.html#NewbieFAQ-IsthereaCodeofConductforApacheprojects?")</em>
+If you're interested in learning more or participating in the Apache CloudStack project, the mailing lists are the best way to do that. While the project has several communications channels, the mailing lists are the most active and the official channels for making decisions about the project itself. *["If it didn't happen on a mailing list, it didn't happen."](http://community.apache.org/newbiefaq.html#NewbieFAQ-IsthereaCodeofConductforApacheprojects?")*
 
 The project currently has several lists:
 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ The project currently has several lists:
 - [issues@](http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/cloudstack-issues/): Notifications from CloudStack's Jira project. This is a high volume list.
 - [marketing@](http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/cloudstack-marketing/): Discussions about marketing CloudStack.
 
-The prefered language to use on the lists above is English. To support the global nature of the CloudStack user community, we also have the following regionally specific user lists:
+The preferred language to use on the lists above is English. To support the global nature of the CloudStack user community, we also have the following regionally specific user lists:
 
 - [users-cn@](http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/cloudstack-users-cn/): Chinese
 
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ The prefered language to use on the list
 
 ## To Subscribe to the Mailing Lists
 
-If you want to subscribe to list, send an email to <em>listname</em>-subscribe@cloudstack.apache.org:
+If you want to subscribe to list, send an email to *listname*-subscribe@cloudstack.apache.org:
 
 - To join the announce mailing list email <a href="mailto:announce-subscribe@cloudstack.apache.org">announce-subscribe@cloudstack.apache.org</a>.
 - To join the users mailing list email <a href="mailto:users-subscribe@cloudstack.apache.org">users-subscribe@cloudstack.apache.org</a>.
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ If you want to subscribe to list, send a
 
 ## To Unsubscribe to the Mailing Lists
 
-Decided you're getting too much mail? To unsubscribe from one of the lists, send an email to <em>listname</em>-unsubscribe@cloudstack.apache.org from the same email you subscribed with.
+Decided you're getting too much mail? To unsubscribe from one of the lists, send an email to *listname*-unsubscribe@cloudstack.apache.org from the same email you subscribed with.
 
 - To leave the announce mailing list email <a href="mailto:announce-unsubscribe@cloudstack.apache.org">announce-unsubscribe@cloudstack.apache.org</a>.
 - To leave the users mailing list email <a href="mailto:users-unsubscribe@cloudstack.apache.org">users-unsubscribe@cloudstack.apache.org</a>.

Modified: cloudstack/site/trunk/content/security.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/cloudstack/site/trunk/content/security.mdtext?rev=1528095&r1=1528094&r2=1528095&view=diff
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--- cloudstack/site/trunk/content/security.mdtext (original)
+++ cloudstack/site/trunk/content/security.mdtext Tue Oct  1 13:53:47 2013
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Title: Apache CloudStack Security
 
 <div class="page-header">
 
-<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack Security</h1>
+<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack: Security</h1>
 
 </div>
 
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ The security team asks that you **please
 <ul>
   <li> Upon receiving notice of a potential security issue, a security team member will create a bug to track the investigation, this bug must be flagged as a security issue. Security flag should mean contents of ticket are not visible to non-security team members
   <li> Security team investigates the issue to confirm/deny the presence of a vulnerability within CloudStack
-  <li> If the issue is determined not to be a vulnerability the reporter will be notified and the issue will be closed as invalid.
+  <li> If the issue is determined not to be a vulnerability the reporter will be notified and the issue will be closed as invalid
   <li> If issue is confirmed as a CloudStack vulnerability:
   <ul>
     <li> Security team notifies the Apache Security team
@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@ The security team asks that you **please
     <li> Security team works with appropriate code maintainer(s) to create patch to mitigate the issue
     <li> Testing is conducted to verify patch mitigates issue and does not cause regression errors
     <li> Security team creates a vulnerability announcement
-    <li> Patch is committed to trunk and other supported branches that are affected.  The commit should not refer to a particular vulnerability.
-    <li> A new CloudStack release or hotfix is prepared and tested, containing the new security patch.
-    <li> Distributor coordination is implemented to enable a coordinated announcement.
+    <li> Patch is committed to trunk and other supported branches that are affected.  The commit should not refer to a particular vulnerability
+    <li> A new CloudStack release or hotfix is prepared and tested, containing the new security patch
+    <li> Distributor coordination is implemented to enable a coordinated announcement
     <li> Security team posts vulnerability announcement to...
     <ul>
       <li> CloudStack dev list

Modified: cloudstack/site/trunk/content/who.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/cloudstack/site/trunk/content/who.mdtext?rev=1528095&r1=1528094&r2=1528095&view=diff
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--- cloudstack/site/trunk/content/who.mdtext (original)
+++ cloudstack/site/trunk/content/who.mdtext Tue Oct  1 13:53:47 2013
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ PMC members are listed in both the PMC m
 
 <div class="page-header">
 
-<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack Project Membership</h1>
+<h1 id="indicators">Apache CloudStack: Project Membership</h1>
 
 </div>