(commons-lang) branch master updated: Clean up text

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     new c52fec693 Clean up text
c52fec693 is described below

commit c52fec6932b9f595e0a5ad22c18f561c228291a4
Author: Gary Gregory <ga...@gmail.com>
AuthorDate: Mon Nov 27 07:37:43 2023 -0500

    Clean up text
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 src/changes/release-notes.vm | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/changes/release-notes.vm b/src/changes/release-notes.vm
index 6bb92b609..63b638a5f 100644
--- a/src/changes/release-notes.vm
+++ b/src/changes/release-notes.vm
@@ -37,13 +37,13 @@ limitations under the License.
                         Release Notes
 
 
-This document contains the release notes for the ${version} version of Apache Commons Lang.
-Commons Lang is a set of utility functions and reusable components that should be of use in any 
-Java environment.
+The Apache Commons team is pleased to announce Apache Commons Lang Version ${version}.
 
-Lang 3.9 and onwards now targets Java 8, making use of features that arrived with Java 8.
+Commons Lang is a set of utility functions and reusable components that should be of use in any Java environment.
 
-For the advice on upgrading from 2.x to 3.x, see the following page: 
+Starting with Commons Lang 3.9, we target Java 8, making use of those features.
+
+For advice on upgrading from 2.x to 3.x, see:
 
     https://commons.apache.org/lang/article3_0.html