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[11/13] incubator-trafodion git commit: Addressed review comments by
Dave Birdsall. Thanks for the help!
Addressed review comments by Dave Birdsall. Thanks for the help!
Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-trafodion/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-trafodion/commit/2f79637f
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-trafodion/tree/2f79637f
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-trafodion/diff/2f79637f
Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: 2f79637f52a622d8a70fa874c6b319a18467c17f
Parents: d714618
Author: Gunnar Tapper <gt...@esgyn.local>
Authored: Wed Feb 17 16:05:48 2016 -0700
Committer: Gunnar Tapper <gt...@esgyn.local>
Committed: Wed Feb 17 16:05:48 2016 -0700
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docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/about.adoc | 4 ++--
docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/activate.adoc | 2 +-
.../src/asciidoc/_chapters/introduction.adoc | 6 +++---
docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/prepare.adoc | 4 ++--
.../src/asciidoc/_chapters/requirements.adoc | 4 ++--
.../src/asciidoc/_chapters/script_install.adoc | 2 +-
6 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/about.adoc b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/about.adoc
index 149c234..1cd4b2f 100644
--- a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/about.adoc
+++ b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/about.adoc
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
////
= About This Document
-This guide describes how to provision the end-user Trafodion binaries ontop of an existing Hadoop environment. This install allows you to store and query data using Trafodion, either via Trafodion clients
+This guide describes how to provision the end-user Trafodion binaries on top of an existing Hadoop environment. This install allows you to store and query data using Trafodion, either via Trafodion clients
(see http://trafodion.incubator.apache.org/client_install/index.html[Trafodion Client Installation Guide] or via application code you write.
If you want to install a Trafodion developer-build environment, then please refer to the
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ http://trafodion.incubator.apache.org/contributing_redirect.html[Trafodion Contr
This guide assumes that you are well-versed in Linux and Hadoop administration. If you don't have such experience, then
you should consider going through the steps required to install a Hadoop environment before attempting to install Trafodion.
-The instructions contained herein applies to the following environments.
+The instructions contained herein apply to the following environments.
* *Single-Node Environments*: Typically used when you want to evaluate Trafodion.
* *Cluster (Multi-Node) Environments*: Typically used when you deploy Trafodion for application usage.
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diff --git a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/activate.adoc b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/activate.adoc
index f785c42..56cecdd 100644
--- a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/activate.adoc
+++ b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/activate.adoc
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ You can use sqlci (part of the base product) or trafci (requires separate instal
http://trafodion.apache.org/docs/client_install/index.html[Trafodion Client Installation Guide]) to validate your installation.
=== Smoke Test
-A simple smoke test to validate that Trafodion is function.
+A simple smoke test to validate that Trafodion is functioning.
```
get schemas;
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diff --git a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/introduction.adoc b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/introduction.adoc
index b327245..ceae133 100644
--- a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/introduction.adoc
+++ b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/introduction.adoc
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ respective environment's configuration settings per Trafodion requirements. Refe
<<requirements-trafodion-provisioning-user,Trafodion Provisioning User>> for more information
about the requirements and usage associated with this user ID.
-* *Runtime User*: A linux-level user under which the Trafodion software runs. This user ID must be registered
+* *Runtime User*: A Linux-level user under which the Trafodion software runs. This user ID must be registered
as a user in the Hadoop Distributed File System (HDFS) to store and access objects in HDFS, HBase, and Hive.
In addition, this user ID requires passwordless access among the nodes where Trafodion is installed.
Refer to <<requirements-trafodion-runtime-user,Trafodion Runtime User>> for more information about this user ID.
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ enable security, which enforces authentication and authorization. Refer to
[[introduction-provisioning-options]]
== Provisioning Options
-Trafodion ships with a set of scripts (the Trafodion Installer) that takes care of many of the installation and upgrade
+Trafodion ships with a set of scripts (the Trafodion Installer) that take care of many of the installation and upgrade
tasks associated with the Trafodion software and its requirements. There is a separate set of scripts to remove Trafodion,
if needed.
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ Options:
The Trafodion Installer automatically detects whether you're performing an install
or an upgrade by looking for the Trafodion Runtime User in the `/etc/passwd` file.
-* If the user ID doesn't exists, then the Trafodion Installer runs in install mode.
+* If the user ID doesn't exist, then the Trafodion Installer runs in install mode.
* If the user ID exists, then the Trafodion Installer runs in upgrade mode.
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diff --git a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/prepare.adoc b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/prepare.adoc
index 1ef6c7f..fced39c 100644
--- a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/prepare.adoc
+++ b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/prepare.adoc
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ If you wish to manually set up the authentication configuration file and enable
== Gather Configuration Information
You need to gather/decide information about your environment to aid installation Trafodion, both for the Trafodion Installer
-and for recipe-based provisioning. (In alphabetical order to make it easier to find information later on in the provisioning process.)
+and for recipe-based provisioning. (Listed in alphabetical order to make it easier to find information when referenced in the install and upgrade instructions.)
[cols="25%l,25%,15%l,35%",options="header"]
|===
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ for more information.
[[prepare-download-and-install-packages]]
=== Download and Install Packages
-The step is required if you're:
+This step is required if you're:
* Installing Trafodion on SUSE.
* Using Recipe-Based Provisioning.
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diff --git a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/requirements.adoc b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/requirements.adoc
index c33717f..dd35865 100644
--- a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/requirements.adoc
+++ b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/requirements.adoc
@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ The following changes are required in `hdfs-site.xml`:
[[requirements-hbase-changes]]
=== HBase Changes
-NOTE: These changes require a restart of ZooKeeper HBase on all nodes in the cluster.
+NOTE: These changes require a restart of ZooKeeper and HBase on all nodes in the cluster.
Trafodion requires that the following changes to the HBase environment:
@@ -466,7 +466,7 @@ NOTE: The Trafodion Installer does *not* make these changes.
=== Recommended Security Changes
The `trafodion` user ID should not be given other `sudo` privileges than what's specified in this manual. Also, we
-that this user ID is locked (`sudo passwd -l trafodion`) once the installation/upgrade activity has been completed.
+recommend that this user ID is locked (`sudo passwd -l trafodion`) once the installation/upgrade activity has been completed.
Users that need issue commands as the `trafodion` ID should do so using `sudo`; for example, `sudo -u trafodion -i`.
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diff --git a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/script_install.adoc b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/script_install.adoc
index ae563a3..cde5718 100644
--- a/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/script_install.adoc
+++ b/docs/provisioning_guide/src/asciidoc/_chapters/script_install.adoc
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ The `--config_file` option runs the Trafodion in Automated Setup mode. Refer to
in the <<introduction,Introduction>> chapter for instructions of how you edit your configuration file.
Edit your config file using the information you collected in the <<prepare-gather-configuration-information,Gather Configuration Information>>
-in the <<prepare,Prepare>> chapter.
+step in the <<prepare,Prepare>> chapter.
The following example shows an automated install of Trafodion on a two-node Hortonworks Hadoop cluster.