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JDO 2.1 spec draft: minor language changes in 5.5.8, "Detached-clean"

I'd suggest that in A5.5.8-1

A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
persistence manager and have not been
modified are detached-clean.] Detach is done by one of three ways:

The phrase "Detach is done by one of three ways" would read better as  
"Detachment is done in one of three ways", as follows:

A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
persistence manager and have not been
modified are detached-clean.] Detachment is done in one of three ways:

- Chris

Re: JDO 2.1 spec draft: minor language changes in 5.5.8, "Detached-clean"

Posted by Craig L Russell <Cr...@Sun.COM>.
Not posted yet. I'll let you all know when...

Craig

On Sep 25, 2007, at 12:07 PM, cbeams wrote:

> where are these new draft versions posted?
>
> - C
>
> On Sep 25, 2007, at 11:04 AM, Craig L Russell wrote:
>
>> Hi Chris,
>>
>> Fixed in draft dated 2007-9-28.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Craig
>>
>> On Sep 15, 2007, at 1:32 PM, cbeams wrote:
>>
>>> I'd suggest that in A5.5.8-1
>>>
>>> A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
>>> persistence manager and have not been
>>> modified are detached-clean.] Detach is done by one of three ways:
>>>
>>> The phrase "Detach is done by one of three ways" would read  
>>> better as "Detachment is done in one of three ways", as follows:
>>>
>>> A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
>>> persistence manager and have not been
>>> modified are detached-clean.] Detachment is done in one of three  
>>> ways:
>>>
>>> - Chris
>>
>> Craig Russell
>> Architect, Sun Java Enterprise System http://java.sun.com/products/ 
>> jdo
>> 408 276-5638 mailto:Craig.Russell@sun.com
>> P.S. A good JDO? O, Gasp!
>>
>

Craig Russell
Architect, Sun Java Enterprise System http://java.sun.com/products/jdo
408 276-5638 mailto:Craig.Russell@sun.com
P.S. A good JDO? O, Gasp!


Re: JDO 2.1 spec draft: minor language changes in 5.5.8, "Detached-clean"

Posted by cbeams <cb...@gmail.com>.
where are these new draft versions posted?

- C

On Sep 25, 2007, at 11:04 AM, Craig L Russell wrote:

> Hi Chris,
>
> Fixed in draft dated 2007-9-28.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Craig
>
> On Sep 15, 2007, at 1:32 PM, cbeams wrote:
>
>> I'd suggest that in A5.5.8-1
>>
>> A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
>> persistence manager and have not been
>> modified are detached-clean.] Detach is done by one of three ways:
>>
>> The phrase "Detach is done by one of three ways" would read better  
>> as "Detachment is done in one of three ways", as follows:
>>
>> A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
>> persistence manager and have not been
>> modified are detached-clean.] Detachment is done in one of three  
>> ways:
>>
>> - Chris
>
> Craig Russell
> Architect, Sun Java Enterprise System http://java.sun.com/products/jdo
> 408 276-5638 mailto:Craig.Russell@sun.com
> P.S. A good JDO? O, Gasp!
>


Re: JDO 2.1 spec draft: minor language changes in 5.5.8, "Detached-clean"

Posted by Craig L Russell <Cr...@Sun.COM>.
Hi Chris,

Fixed in draft dated 2007-9-28.

Thanks,

Craig

On Sep 15, 2007, at 1:32 PM, cbeams wrote:

> I'd suggest that in A5.5.8-1
>
> A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
> persistence manager and have not been
> modified are detached-clean.] Detach is done by one of three ways:
>
> The phrase "Detach is done by one of three ways" would read better  
> as "Detachment is done in one of three ways", as follows:
>
> A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
> persistence manager and have not been
> modified are detached-clean.] Detachment is done in one of three ways:
>
> - Chris

Craig Russell
Architect, Sun Java Enterprise System http://java.sun.com/products/jdo
408 276-5638 mailto:Craig.Russell@sun.com
P.S. A good JDO? O, Gasp!