[GitHub] [incubator-milagro] sebbASF commented on issue #20: Mangled sentence

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sebbASF commented on issue #20: Mangled sentence
URL: https://github.com/apache/incubator-milagro/issues/20#issuecomment-531179299
 
 
   It's better, but still a bit hard to read.
   
   The following phrase:
   
   "the need for a PKI infrastructure as the main reason to issue certificates"
   
   would read better as
   
   "the need for a PKI infrastructure, since the main reason to issue certificates"
   
   As it stands, the "as" clause is ambiguous.
   It could be taken in the sense of "Using another system as a backup".
   The word "since" does not have that double meaning, and the comma helps too.

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