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Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

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Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, and Joe Brockmeier.


Description
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Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.


This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.


Diffs
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  docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
  docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
  docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/


Testing
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Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.

Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.


Thanks,

Radhika PC


Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Pranav Saxena <pr...@citrix.com>.
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Patch applied cleanly and has been merged with asf/master . 
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-cloudstack/commit/eaf7767c

Thanks !

- Pranav Saxena


On Feb. 13, 2013, 6:58 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> (Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 6:58 a.m.)
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> 
> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, Likitha Shetty, and Joe Brockmeier.
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.
> 
> 
> This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
>   docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
>   docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.
> 
> Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Radhika PC
> 
>


RE: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Radhika Puthiyetath <ra...@citrix.com>.
I am saved! Thank you Pranav.

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Sent: Thursday, February 14, 2013 4:03 PM
To: Chip Childers; Joe Brockmeier; David Nalley; Likitha Shetty; Jessica Tomechak
Cc: cloudstack; Radhika Puthiyetath; Pranav Saxena
Subject: Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network


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Both patches applied cleanly on master and 4.1 . Merged with both the branches. Please mark the review request as Submitted. 
4.1 - Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-cloudstack/commit/64bd5f39
master - Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-cloudstack/commit/26679e88

Thanks !

- Pranav Saxena


On Feb. 13, 2013, 10:03 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> (Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 10:03 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, Likitha Shetty, and Joe Brockmeier.
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.
> 
> 
> This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
>   docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
>   docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.
> 
> Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Radhika PC
> 
>


Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Pranav Saxena <pr...@citrix.com>.
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Both patches applied cleanly on master and 4.1 . Merged with both the branches. Please mark the review request as Submitted. 
4.1 - Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-cloudstack/commit/64bd5f39
master - Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/incubator-cloudstack/commit/26679e88

Thanks !

- Pranav Saxena


On Feb. 13, 2013, 10:03 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/
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> 
> (Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 10:03 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, Likitha Shetty, and Joe Brockmeier.
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.
> 
> 
> This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
>   docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
>   docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.
> 
> Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Radhika PC
> 
>


RE: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Animesh Chaturvedi <an...@citrix.com>.
Committer that are on the review list if this looks good please submit the patch and bring this patch to closure

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Radhika PC [mailto:noreply@reviews.apache.org] On Behalf Of Radhika
> PC
> Sent: Wednesday, February 13, 2013 2:04 AM
> To: Chip Childers; Joe Brockmeier; David Nalley; Likitha Shetty; Jessica
> Tomechak
> Cc: cloudstack; Radhika Puthiyetath; Pranav Saxena
> Subject: Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network
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> (Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 10:03 a.m.)
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> 
> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak,
> Likitha Shetty, and Joe Brockmeier.
> 
> 
> Changes
> -------
> 
> 1. Updated the diff. This new patch should not break the build. I added a
> conditional tag to creating-network-offerings.xml file so that it would not break
> install guide. This section is not part of the Install Guide on the master. Need to
> fix. I tested my changes against the wrong set of Install guide files, which
> showed that the doc builds just fine! Mistake from my part.
> 
> 2. Created a new patch against 4.1 branch, mainly because the creating-
> network-offerings.xml is different on 4.1. There are many changes went into
> 4.1 but not on master. Please merge in master. Please make sure that my
> changes are not over-written.
> 
> Sorry Pranav for the double work. Thanks Rohit for reporting the issue
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document
> describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the
> advantages.
> 
> 
> This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.
> 
> 
> Diffs (updated)
> -----
> 
>   docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0
>   docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1
>   docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.
> 
> Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Radhika PC


Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Radhika PC <ra...@citrix.com>.
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(Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 10:03 a.m.)


Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, Likitha Shetty, and Joe Brockmeier.


Changes
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1. Updated the diff. This new patch should not break the build. I added a conditional tag to creating-network-offerings.xml file so that it would not break install guide. This section is not part of the Install Guide on the master. Need to fix. I tested my changes against the wrong set of Install guide files, which showed that the doc builds just fine! Mistake from my part.

2. Created a new patch against 4.1 branch, mainly because the creating-network-offerings.xml is different on 4.1. There are many changes went into 4.1 but not on master. Please merge in master. Please make sure that my changes are not over-written.

Sorry Pranav for the double work. Thanks Rohit for reporting the issue


Description
-------

Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.


This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.


Diffs (updated)
-----

  docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
  docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
  docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/


Testing
-------

Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.

Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.


Thanks,

Radhika PC


Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Pranav Saxena <pr...@citrix.com>.
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Sorry , not able to apply your patch cleanly on 4.1 because of this - 

error: patch failed: docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml:22
error: docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml: patch does not apply

could you please check ?

Thanks!

- Pranav Saxena


On Feb. 13, 2013, 8:18 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> (Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 8:18 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, Likitha Shetty, and Joe Brockmeier.
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.
> 
> 
> This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
>   docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
>   docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.
> 
> Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Radhika PC
> 
>


Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Radhika PC <ra...@citrix.com>.
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(Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 8:18 a.m.)


Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, Likitha Shetty, and Joe Brockmeier.


Changes
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created a patch purely for 4.1 branch.


Description
-------

Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.


This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.


Diffs
-----

  docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
  docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
  docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/


Testing
-------

Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.

Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.


Thanks,

Radhika PC


Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Radhika PC <ra...@citrix.com>.

> On Feb. 13, 2013, 7:54 a.m., Pranav Saxena wrote:
> > Tried to cherry pick the same commit to 4.1 but it gives a merge conflict in networkOfferings.xml file. Could you please resolve them and send an updated patch for asf/4.1 . 
> > 
> > Regards,
> > Pranav

Jessica had some commit on the 4.1 branch (on the file creating-network-offering.xml)because of which there was a merge conflict. I am attaching a new patch taken against 4.1 branch is attaching. Please merge.


- Radhika


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On Feb. 13, 2013, 8:18 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/
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> 
> (Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 8:18 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, Likitha Shetty, and Joe Brockmeier.
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.
> 
> 
> This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
>   docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
>   docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.
> 
> Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Radhika PC
> 
>


Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Pranav Saxena <pr...@citrix.com>.
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Tried to cherry pick the same commit to 4.1 but it gives a merge conflict in networkOfferings.xml file. Could you please resolve them and send an updated patch for asf/4.1 . 

Regards,
Pranav

- Pranav Saxena


On Feb. 13, 2013, 6:58 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> 
> (Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 6:58 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, Likitha Shetty, and Joe Brockmeier.
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.
> 
> 
> This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
>   docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
>   docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.
> 
> Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Radhika PC
> 
>


Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Radhika PC <ra...@citrix.com>.
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(Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 6:58 a.m.)


Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, Likitha Shetty, and Joe Brockmeier.


Changes
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missed to included the owner of the feature to the reviewer list.


Description
-------

Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.


This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.


Diffs
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  docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
  docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
  docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 

Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/


Testing
-------

Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.

Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.


Thanks,

Radhika PC


Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Likitha Shetty <li...@citrix.com>.
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Ship it!


Applies cleanly on master

- Likitha Shetty


On Feb. 13, 2013, 6:02 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> (Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 6:02 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, and Joe Brockmeier.
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.
> 
> 
> This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
>   docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
>   docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.
> 
> Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Radhika PC
> 
>


Re: Review Request: Documentation on Persistent Network

Posted by Likitha Shetty <li...@citrix.com>.
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Content looks good to me.

- Likitha Shetty


On Feb. 13, 2013, 6:02 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> 
> (Updated Feb. 13, 2013, 6:02 a.m.)
> 
> 
> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, and Joe Brockmeier.
> 
> 
> Description
> -------
> 
> Documentation changes for the feature Persistent Network. The document describes what is Persistent Networks, how to configure one, and the advantages.
> 
> 
> This addresses bug CLOUDSTACK-852.
> 
> 
> Diffs
> -----
> 
>   docs/en-US/creating-network-offerings.xml 0269ce0 
>   docs/en-US/networks.xml a7b9ea1 
>   docs/en-US/persistent-network.xml PRE-CREATION 
> 
> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/9421/diff/
> 
> 
> Testing
> -------
> 
> Patch cleanly applies. The initial tech review is done by the developer.
> 
> Build fine for both Admin and Install Guides.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Radhika PC
> 
>