[comdev-site] branch master updated: Update contactpoints.md

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The following commit(s) were added to refs/heads/master by this push:
     new 1813b2c  Update contactpoints.md
     new 5003aae  Merge pull request #40 from cottage14/patch-25
1813b2c is described below

commit 1813b2c47945fec555572a6866c6285cb0d28c6e
Author: Andrew Wetmore <an...@cottage14.com>
AuthorDate: Thu Dec 10 09:12:00 2020 -0400

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@@ -3,61 +3,59 @@ title: ContactPoints
 ---
 
 If you have a question about anything Apache, the ComDev project is here to help.  
-To help us help you, please try to direct your question to the right mailing list - our 
+To help us help you, try to direct your question to the right mailing list - our 
 volunteer committers do all their work on mailing lists.
 
 # Community Questions
 
-Questions about community or issues across multiple Apache projects should 
-be [emailed to dev@community.apache.org](mailto:dev@community.apache.org?subject=New-Contact-Question) - or see our detailed [Mailing List How To](//community.apache.org/lists.html) page.
+Email questions about community or issues across multiple Apache projects to [dev@community.apache.org](mailto:dev@community.apache.org?subject=New-Contact-Question) - or see our detailed [Mailing List How To](//community.apache.org/lists.html) page.
 
 # Technical Questions
 
 If you have a *technical* question about *this* website, or one of the tools that 
-the ComDev project builds, email us at dev@community.
+the ComDev project builds, email us at `dev@community`.
 
-If you *technical* question about *any other* Apache project, please email 
-the [appropriate user@*projectname*.apache.org](/lists.html) list, or the dev@ list for 
+If you *technical* question about *any other* Apache project, email 
+the [appropriate user@*projectname*.apache.org](/lists.html) list, or the `dev@` list for 
 the project.
 
 # Non-Technical Questions
 
-Each of the below email lists are privately archived: you can mail to them, and 
-we'll answer, but you won't be able to read archives.
+Each of Apache's email lists is privately archived: you can mail to them, and 
+we'll answer, but you won't be able to read the archives.
 
 <a name="ContactPoints-Trademarks"></a>
 ## Trademarks
 
 Issues regarding trademarks, specific project names, or branding of the
-ASF and any projects: please see our [Trademark Site Map](//www.apache.org/foundation/marks/resources), 
-or send email to [trademarks@apache.org](mailto:trademarks@apache.org)
+ASF and any projects: see our [Trademark Site Map](//www.apache.org/foundation/marks/resources), 
+or send email to [trademarks@apache.org](mailto:trademarks@apache.org).
 
 
 <a name="ContactPoints-PublicityandMarketing"></a>
 ## Publicity and Marketing
 
 Issues dealing with publicity, marketing, or any inquires from the
-press or analysts can see our [Press Team Page](https://www.apache.org/press/),
- or email to [press@apache.org](mailto:press@apache.org)
+press or analysts: see our [Press Team Page](https://www.apache.org/press/),
+ or email to [press@apache.org](mailto:press@apache.org).
 
 <a name="ContactPoints-FundraisingandSponsorship"></a>
 ## Fundraising and Sponsorship
 
 Questions about fundraising, sponsorships, donations, or related
-finances should see our [Donations Information](//www.apache.org/foundation/contributing.html),
-or email to [fundraising@apache.org](mailto:fundraising@apache.org)
+finances: see our [Donations Information](//www.apache.org/foundation/contributing.html),
+or email to [fundraising@apache.org](mailto:fundraising@apache.org).
 
 <a name="ContactPoints-Legal"></a>
 ### Legal
 
-Specific legal questions that may need to be private, and require a
-response from the ASF's legal counsel to to 
-[legal-internal@apache.org](mailto:legal-internal@apache.org)
+Send specific legal questions that may need to be private, and require a
+response from the ASF's legal counsel to 
+[legal-internal@apache.org](mailto:legal-internal@apache.org).
 
 Please read our [Legal FAQs](https://www.apache.org/legal/#user-links) first.
 
 <a name="ContactPoints-Other"></a>
 ### Other
 
-For more information on these and other foundation lists see the [Mailing Lists](https://www.apache.org/foundation/mailinglists.html)
- page.
+For more information on these and other foundation lists, see the [Mailing Lists](https://www.apache.org/foundation/mailinglists.html) page.