[jira] [Commented] (CAMEL-7252) Archived should be achieved; have should be has

["Ron Wheeler (JIRA)" <ji...@apache.org>]

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Ron Wheeler commented on CAMEL-7252:
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 Point to Point Channel
We using JMS queues so there are only one receive of the message exchange 
It is difficult to understand what the author actully intended to say.

We using JMS queues so there is only one receive of the message exchange.
Fixes the verb agreemet but still leaves the question about "only one receive of the message exchange." actually is trying to describe.

 Event Driven Consumer

Yes the JMS broker is of course event driven and only reacts when the client sends a message to the server.  contains extra words that add nothing and lack punctuation to make is readable

The JMS broker is event driven and is invoked (or activated?) when the client sends a message to the server.


>   Archived should be achieved; have should be has
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>                 Key: CAMEL-7252
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CAMEL-7252
>             Project: Camel
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: website
>    Affects Versions: 2.12.3
>         Environment: All
>            Reporter: Ron Wheeler
>              Labels: web-site
>
> On http://camel.apache.org/tutorial-jmsremoting.html, the sentence describing the Message Endpoint says "It should be easy to send messages to the Server from the the clients. This is ***archived*** with Camels powerful Endpoint pattern that even can be more powerful combined with Spring remoting. The tutorial ***have*** clients using each kind of technique for this." 
> It probably should say "It should be easy to send messages to the Server from the the clients. This is achieved with Camels powerful Endpoint pattern that even can be more powerful combined with Spring remoting. The tutorial has clients using each kind of technique for this." 



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