svn commit: r1541043 - /comdev/site/trunk/content/newcomers/index.mdtext

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Author: curcuru
Date: Tue Nov 12 13:04:18 2013
New Revision: 1541043

URL: http://svn.apache.org/r1541043
Log:
Typos, cleanup

Modified:
    comdev/site/trunk/content/newcomers/index.mdtext

Modified: comdev/site/trunk/content/newcomers/index.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/comdev/site/trunk/content/newcomers/index.mdtext?rev=1541043&r1=1541042&r2=1541043&view=diff
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--- comdev/site/trunk/content/newcomers/index.mdtext (original)
+++ comdev/site/trunk/content/newcomers/index.mdtext Tue Nov 12 13:04:18 2013
@@ -17,9 +17,9 @@ Notice:    Licensed to the Apache Softwa
            under the License.
 
 In this section we hope to help you take your first steps as an open source 
-developer in the Apache community.
+developer in one of our many Apache project communities.
 
-  * [Where do I start?](/gettingStarted/101.html) - a guide to your first engagement with and Apache project
+  * [Where do I start?](/gettingStarted/101.html) - a guide to your first engagement with an Apache project
   * [Mentoring Programme](/mentoringprogramme.html) - an introduction to our mentoring programme
       * [Mentoring in formal education](/mentorprogrammeformaleducation.html) - how to engage your students on open source
   * [Local Mentors Programme](/localmentors.html) - Find ASF people who live near you
@@ -36,10 +36,10 @@ how much you can help, even now. 
 
 Since we aim to be a place for newcomers to learn
 about the ASF as a whole and you are (probably) a newcomer *any feedback
-you can give or unanswered questions you can ask* will help us improve what
+you can give or unanswered questions you can ask us here* will help us improve what
 we offer to those who come afterwards. 
 
-Feedback can be provided and questions asked by subscribing to our mailing
+Feedback can be provided on this website and questions asked about anything Apache by subscribing to our mailing
 list by sending a mail to 
-[dev-subscribe@community.apache.org](mailto:dev-subscribe@community.apache.org). Once subscribe you can send your mail to
+[dev-subscribe@community.apache.org](mailto:dev-subscribe@community.apache.org). Once subscribed you can send your mail to
 [dev@community.apache.org](mailto:dev@community.apache.org).