[GitHub] [pulsar] Anonymitaet commented on a change in pull request #5140: [doc] Improve Pulsar Deployment DCOS

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Anonymitaet commented on a change in pull request #5140: [doc] Improve Pulsar Deployment DCOS
URL: https://github.com/apache/pulsar/pull/5140#discussion_r322047524
 
 

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 File path: site2/docs/deploy-dcos.md
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 @@ -42,14 +42,14 @@ You can deploy Pulsar on DC/OS using this command:
 $ dcos marathon group add PulsarGroups.json
 ```
 
-This command will deploy Docker container instances in three groups, which together comprise a Pulsar cluster:
+This command deploys Docker container instances in three groups, which together comprise a Pulsar cluster:
 
 * 3 bookies (1 [bookie](reference-terminology.md#bookie) on each agent node and 1 [bookie recovery](http://bookkeeper.apache.org/docs/latest/admin/autorecovery/) instance)
 * 3 Pulsar [brokers](reference-terminology.md#broker) (1 broker on each node and 1 admin instance)
 * 1 [Prometheus](http://prometheus.io/) instance and 1 [Grafana](https://grafana.com/) instance
 
 
-> When running DC/OS, a ZooKeeper cluster is already running at `master.mesos:2181`, thus there's no need to install or start up ZooKeeper separately.
+> When you run DC/OS, a ZooKeeper cluster already run at `master.mesos:2181`, thus you do not have to install or start up ZooKeeper separately.
 
 Review comment:
   ```suggestion
   > When you run DC/OS, a ZooKeeper cluster already runs at `master.mesos:2181`, thus you do not have to install or start up ZooKeeper separately.
   ```

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